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great story
Loved your way with words, very erotic. Would have gotten highest rating but for small typos like:
"Again I thought I don't have to let him do this. I don't have to."
"Him" should be "her".
Also, didn't really need the radio bit - did not add anything. I do wonder if the math grades improved :-)
Nice plot-Not as well written but pleasant
Personally I would have perfeed if the spanking was softer and more symbolic leading to direct sex-
I hate you
Okay... no... I don't really hate you. I apologize. It's just that I really (really!) envy your talent. I've been reading your previous submissions and it seems as though you can just sit down and write something wonderful, erotic, or thought-provoking as a stream of consciousness in the time that it takes me to have a cigarette. Phrases like "The wood seemed to sing as it hit my poor, naked skin." seem to just come to you effortlessly. If you ever decide to write a "How to" I'm definitely reading it! Till then, I'll be looking forward to more of your submissions.
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