This is a great start and very well written. You set the fantasy up so that I can wait to see what happens with the rest of the family or when the mom gets home.
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Anonymous02/08/09
Great start!
Great story for your first one! I feel that it was a little too fast paced, and there was a lack in some of the details, but other than that, great job! Keep it up!
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Anonymous02/08/09
Nice start is right
This could turn into a real family fuckfest...but the son needs to fuck his mommy as she needs it as well..........
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Anonymous02/08/09
Well written?
This thing is so loaded with misspellings, punctuation errors and awkward syntax that it was unreadable for me. Well written, shit! The story was alright as far as I could get. Beware of praise from illiterate readers.
Thank you for sharing although this was a typical incest story that was poorly written and not very sexy.
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Anonymous02/08/09
continue story..adding in hot dad/son bi with mom
continue story..and give women/moms like myself...as well as real bi couples like us...major turn-on with hottt bi family fun action especially with dad/jock son...with mom as part of it..and definetly make your dialogue much more sex charged...as a family like this would be about...
I would think that a horny boy of 18 wouldn't need 2 seconds to make up his mind about fucking an extremely sexy mom and sister. He has to mature and take his place along side of his father as another alpha-male in the family. He should think of the females in the family as his and at his disposal to breed as he see fit. I think that he should request to his father, that the mother of the family share his bed for a week in order to get the extra male hormones under control. In other words, fuck her ragged for a week. Thanks for the post....Rich
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Anonymous02/12/09
Where
Grammar is atrocious... please learn the difference between "where" and "were" for example!
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Anonymous06/22/09
being taken in the family
wow like the start of this story a family secret ch1.
a few spelling mistakes but who care. only the brain boxes
English
good start
This is a great start and very well written. You set the fantasy up so that I can wait to see what happens with the rest of the family or when the mom gets home.
Great start!
Great story for your first one! I feel that it was a little too fast paced, and there was a lack in some of the details, but other than that, great job! Keep it up!
Nice start is right
This could turn into a real family fuckfest...but the son needs to fuck his mommy as she needs it as well..........
Well written?
This thing is so loaded with misspellings, punctuation errors and awkward syntax that it was unreadable for me. Well written, shit! The story was alright as far as I could get. Beware of praise from illiterate readers.
Typical
Thank you for sharing although this was a typical incest story that was poorly written and not very sexy.
continue story..adding in hot dad/son bi with mom
continue story..and give women/moms like myself...as well as real bi couples like us...major turn-on with hottt bi family fun action especially with dad/jock son...with mom as part of it..and definetly make your dialogue much more sex charged...as a family like this would be about...
Well you've got my attention and interest
I would think that a horny boy of 18 wouldn't need 2 seconds to make up his mind about fucking an extremely sexy mom and sister. He has to mature and take his place along side of his father as another alpha-male in the family. He should think of the females in the family as his and at his disposal to breed as he see fit. I think that he should request to his father, that the mother of the family share his bed for a week in order to get the extra male hormones under control. In other words, fuck her ragged for a week. Thanks for the post....Rich
Where
Grammar is atrocious... please learn the difference between "where" and "were" for example!
being taken in the family
wow like the start of this story a family secret ch1.
a few spelling mistakes but who care. only the brain boxes
A great store looking forward to check out more
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