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by Anonymous08/12/08

Story Line?

When you establish Kenny as 32 and Karen as 25, you set a seven year age difference that makes it a little difficult to stay with the story line when you say they met in elementary school and became "close" friends - they weren't even in high school together.

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by cashNcarrie08/15/08

You're right

Thanks for the constructive criticism. I hope you are enjoying the story unlike some of the guys who are a little self-conscious and maybe a tad racist.

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