All Comments on 'Babysitter'

This was a really good story. got to the sex quickly. and the park scene was great. if you make a next chapter. maybe add her telling him how long she felt this way about him, kinda a back story to explain why she was so excited to babysit. and maybe a little something on why dad is so into getting them together.

That was really good, grammar and splling was top notch and description was accurate and really exciting;)

if you make another, maybe include some sex elsewhere, at there college, or somewhere a bit more....risky...:)

I've always liked stories like this. This one sounds halfway believable, and there are zero spelling errors. Keep up the good work!

Very good story

Really enjoyed it :)

Amazing story. Really well done.

Things were much to easy for someone who was suppose to not have engaged in sexual activity. The conversation between father and son was to far out in space to believe in my point of view.