All Comments on 'What Have I Done'

Must continue to see what happens tomorrow. I got hard reading this . I liked it

story was hot my panties are soaked here

totally hot, I'm gonna go jack off now

made me all hot and sticky.

this totally made me so wet and horny

I can't believe he forced himself on his daughter that nasty bastard and to top it off , she liked it . Never say never again .

This is the kind of story I look for. Perfect! Excellent writing, more please!

liked it!

No parent would put a 19 year old daughter and 22 year old son in the same bed. The father has his daugther sleep with him and his wife. The father fucks her, rather he rapes her, with his wife next to him. The only realistic part of this was when the father wondered why his daughter would bring such made for sex lingerie with her on a family vacation.

I got wet. I love these kind of stories. Could you please write more???

This was so incredibly hot. I have such a daddy fetish. Yum.

next story ..maybe he just wanted to hump her ass and who know what can happen

loved it especially when the wife woke up and he kept on fucking her. I hope to read more about the whole bunch fucking like mink in the next chapter. Thanks for the good post....Rich

it was good or me! How about you all?

Just wish it was longer. Keep writing.

My favorite part is when Mom wakes up.. that's soooo hot!!

You just made your first grandchild, another baby and your daughter's baby all rolled into one.

I wonder what happens next when she does get her own room. Does she invite dad over or will brother get a taste?

I loved everybit of it. U should write a second chp. 2 it

Please write another. It shouldn't end here. Go on to when Gabrielle gets her own room.

What about a pregnant Gabrielle?

Loved the story, there had better soon be more.

"Embarassed", "Ashamed", no way he should feel such, Gabrielle obviously loves cock and will be getting it regularly, why shouldn't she get her father's cock? I sure hope your continuation tells us she is pregnant.

love the thought of daddy barebacking his daughter as mommy sleeps the night away...hope they made a baby for mom to raise

This story is so hot, I don't know how many times I have read it but I cum every time!

YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS STORY

When Gabrielle gets get own room, Dad should fuck her ass next. In fact her brother and his friend should join in too. She can have one in each of her precious holes.

Mmm I loved this story. Love how he rapes her and she likes it. Fucking in the bed with mom sleeping. When she wakes up, he keeps fucking his daughter. How hot!! I am so wet now. Wish my daddy would come in my room right now and take me...

Mmm I loved this story. Love how he rapes her and she likes it. Fucking in the bed with mom sleeping. When she wakes up, he keeps fucking his daughter. How hot!! I wish I was that Dad

All your stories make me so wet and cum so hard.. Please don't stop posting!

to wish it was me. I will be ur daddy and fuck you till you come 5 times.

Very nicely written story. So realistic I loved the way the father forcibly had love making her but never hurt his daughter, Perfect way of romancing. The words embarrassed and ashamed make sense and made the story more erotic.

Too bad that dad didnt wear a condom like Tommy since it was one of her hottest day and twins run on her dad's side of the family!

EXCELLENT WRITER. ROUSED ME. THANK YOU.

Wooow wht a brave daddy,did anything for sweet baby cunt,hot and tempting.

What's wrong with your sickos, the dad just forcibly raped his daughter!!! Just like she deserved that dirty little slut!!!!!

I 100% love this story!

I can't say how many times I have read this and re-read from memory.

This story is one of the best on this site and one to always go back to If you wanna get horny quick!

Always gets me all hot and wet!

SCREW you! ya dirty bastard!!!!

I had a tissue in the right place at the right time and my cum blew right through it - and all over everything!!

what a mess!

ummm.... thank you?

Every time this helps me get off, making me think of my controlling geography teacher.... Yummmm.... Thanks soo much...

the story is awful, the fact that he forcefully fucked his 19 year old that nasty.

To top it off none of this is realistic, he's fucking his daughter right next to his wife who even woke up and he didn't get caught. Where was your brain at?

but w-e all want more

Thanks;

DKP

This story was so incredibly hot!!! You should post more just like it! My dad used to finger me and have me sitting on his lap fucking me with a blanket over our laps all the time and no one ever had any idea. So the mom not knowing really isn't that far fetched! I loved everything about this story!!!

Mmmmm yeah, I am very wet and just wishing I had that daddy inside me right now. I love the stories where the girl has to go from saying no to having an orgasm, she loves her daddy's big dick. Mm, I loved my daddy's dick and tongue too. We had to sneak around, he taught me to masturbate and how to suck a cock. I still play with my wet pussy and squeeze my nipples thinking about him. Great story!!!

They way you fuck her is how my daddy use to do me

I want more I'm so wet my bed is soaked!!!

id like to fuck my daughters and have them enjoy the experience as I really would

Wow! I seriously love this story!! I can't tell you how many times I have read this story and each time it turns me on more and more. You have to write more then these chapters!! If I could give it more then 5 stars I would!

This is how my dad started fucking me when I was young - forcefully but with love. 20yrs later and we still fuck almost every day.

Lovely story

I wish my dad could fuck me like that because I sure would enjoy his cock inside my pussy!

This is absolutely my favorite story. I'm a girl and I wish my daddy would do that to me I would never make the first move but this kind of would give me the excuse to be fucked by daddy. Super hot. I wish the story would continue after part 2. I reread this story so often and it always makes me cum so hard. LOVE it...

I always end up back onto this story when I get in the mood. It has everything I want, protest, deep fucking, mom sleeping next to them. The rush of getting caught, fuck, write more like this please.

I love reading stories like these, it makes me so wet!

the way he forcefully made love with his daughter without hurting her and the way she slowly with a low voice asking him to stop and dont do but still he do the thing, the chemistry is awsome. Very nice narrating. I want this kind of stories.

Enjoyed the story very much. The tensions.

I think what I love more than the story are the girls that have posted below wishing their daddy would fuck them, thats just awesomely hot! I'm in my late 40's, decently good looking, around 5'7-9, very thin and married, my wife and I never had kids. I never really wanted to raise kids, well young ones anyway... I always fantasized about having a daughter or three starting at the age where they were well behaved and somewhat self sufficient, but being daddy's girls we would spend a lot of time together doing things, going places. Anything from my girl snuggled up on me in the recliner watching movies to shopping or out camping... I've had this fantasy since I think I was in my early twenties and single, I always picture it in my head just the girl(s) and me, never a wife/mother, I think because the fantasy is so old.

...at some point I started reading erotica and the fantasies changed up, Im not sure if they did before or after I started reading incest stories. Sometimes their my girls, sometimes their adopted, sometimes its a girl or girls I took in from some bad homeless situation off the streets. Invariably the girl wants her daddy or one girl does and the others get jealous and want me too.

Now I fantasize about meeting someone like one of the girls that posted below that lives in the area that wants me to be her daddy... We get together to talk and visit, listen to her troubles and help out with advice, do things and have coffee together. I'll find some way to introduce her here at the house so the wife would be comfortable with her coming/being around (matching interests/hobbies... In one or two imaginary synarios for a reason why she hangs around me I had saved her life by keeping a car from hitting her, in another I saved her from being attacked/raped in a parking lot)

....and of course the main underlying reason we're together is the need for intimacy with each other, anything from just what we could barely legally get by with in public, to heavy petting, fingers and tongues, to any crazy sex we can think of! ;). In some alternate versions shes submissive (nothing too weird) and while we're shopping I buy her a collar to wear when we're out together so everyone (who gets it) knows she's mine! :)

I wonder what fantasies others have along these lines?

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Really good you should make more chapters

One summer, I went to visit my Dad he and my stepmother. My stepmother worked nights and I would sleep in the bed with my Dad. When growning up my mother tough us girls to never sleep in your panties. This night I slept in my dads big tshirt.

I'm a very hard sleeper, I was 13yrs old and a full size girl for my age. One night my dad was pressing his cock against my butt and I could feel it being hard. This happen almost every night, more and more, harder and harder. On this day we had been out running around all day into the late night, visiting family and shopping. When we got home I was beat. I'm sure Daddy played with me, rubbing his cock between my butt and touching my pussy lips. I was dozing in and out and I could feel something happening. My pussy got wet and I could feel it, and my Dad did too. I pretended to be sleep and Daddy slowly put his cock in my opening, poking in a little at a time, half way in he stopped there and started to hump me, for what seemed like an hour, this we did every night for weeks, I never let Daddy know I was awake. He would cum on me, my pussy lips, butt and he would clean me up and thats when he started licking my pussy every night. I would look forward to going to bed every night with my Dad and we never spoke of this, it would just happen and our days were normal. To this day I'm totally into sleep sex with older men.

I've read this story many times over the years. I wish you were still submitting stories here, especially on this subject. I love the sneaking and the reluctance and how her body's reaction is so strong it just takes over. I think another reason this story is such a favorite is because there isn't that cliche porno talk; "Oh yeah daddy, fuck me with that big ol' cock! Oooooh yeah!" I much prefer your more realistic dialogue. I also love Movie Night and the other, I think called Snowbound.

Its probably the hottest story I've read. She doesn't want it and then she does. Love it like that.

I came so hard reading this story. You have made my pussy ache for more!

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how your wife would react if you told her you came in your own daughter right beside her? It doesn't matter the reason you fucked her faggot kill yourself after you tell your wife

People getting all excited about nothing. It is just a story. And if it isn't there ain't a thing you can do about it. I used to drive a cab and one time I used to take these young girls to school and pick them up. The older one always wanted to ride up front. One day it was just her. She didn't let her folks know her classes started later that day. She sat with her legs cocked wide open. No panties. She'd turned in the seat so I could see between her shapely slender legs. Her cunt was hairy and I got a whiff of the sweet tangy fragrance of pussy. I told I suddenly felt really hungry. She told me I should stop for a bite of something sweet and juicy to eat. I said there were no stores where I could get what I want. Her reply set it off. There's something you can eat right here...daddy. I ate her tender cunt. I parked at a place I knew. We went to the woods not far from the cab. I had to keep it in sight. I fucked the little girl then ate her pussy with a load of cum in it. She said that felt extra good. I fucked that girl from 10th grade all the way through college. After she graduated we got married. I later went to college and graduated. Now we both have master's degrees(she has four!)and have a pretty nice life together. We are now 35 she and 49 me. She still looks like a school girl and I am just average looking guy. BTW...she told me she knew she was going to marry me when I first started driving her to school. She even told her father.

STOP. UR FUCKING DISCUSTING SHE DOESNT WANT IT

Normally i dont write comments but i have to in this situation! I have read this story dusin of times now and i still love it so much. Thx a lot. Hope you will keep writing!! Ill keep coming back for a read......

Good story but hard to believe

The bit where the tip of dads cock is rubbing into her is so hot. I've gone back and read this one too many times... even thinking about it makes me so hard all over again

RAPE! Pretty sick, guy didnt give a damn about daughter. Maybe he gets same in prison?

RAPE! Pretty sick, guy didnt give a damn about daughter. Maybe he gets same in prison?

She wanted daddy's cock that's hot n sexy

i have wanted my sexy daughter ever since she turned 18 i would give anything to cum deep inside her tight pussy

This one is rape . That's not cool at all that he forced himself onto/ into her she did say no repeatedly

That what u deserve slut

I was looking for a larry stylinson fanfiction, I don't know how I ended up here, and sayed reading.. I'm 14, and need Jesus and holy water drops to clear my eyes of wha t I just read

It was really great. I`m so wet right now!

I can see people saying humans are sexual beings just like any other animal and fucking is in our nature but fucking your daughter is completely wrong on all levels. That girl will now think she owes something to men because he is her father figure. There are limits and control is needed and achievable.

#1. No means no so this fucking scum bag father is a rapist. #2. The anon commenter on 6/26 is a fucking pedophile having sex with a 14 year old like that. He should have his balls cut off, the sick fuck!! I'm surprised she didn't have to put down her Barbie before dearest daddy mounted her.

Sorry for the sermon. I love incest as a fantasy but only with consensual adults. No kids and no force.

What you did was unforgivable! My daughter asked me if I would fuck her when she was fifteen, but I never took advantage of her. That would be really wrong. No means NO! You asshole

My brother was reluctant and protested when my niece , his daughter , as I held his hard cock, after he walked in on her licking my wet , dripping pussy just after he shot his hot cum, incestuous seed into his little sister, she saw us , spyed for years, he walked into the bathroom as she , naked spread my knees and licked his cum, her own father's hot cum, from my cunt, it dripping on her tongue, he walked back in as my niece asked me , would you help me ? Help me, convince my daddy , to fuck me?, when he came in , full erection for hIs daughter to see, I pushed her down and guided his hard cock , as without contact , her small vagina , got wet and swollen, her lips separated and pushed the engorged head into her , she whimpered please aunt Shelly, as my brother thrusted his steel hard cock deep into her, taking her innocence away, again she whimpered , and then moaned , and asked did you fuck aunt Shelly when she was my age? Or did you do it right on her 18th birthday? No he answered your grandma held her dads , your great grandfather's cock as your aunt Shelly first felt a cock in her vagina , and it was her birthday at midnight, your cousin is a result of that, also your cousin Hanna, is probably your sister.

The author stated clearly that there would be non consent, so why are all of you getting so self righteous? Plus this is the incest/taboo section. If you have problems with that, why did you read this in the first place?

Come on people. This is fiction. It didn't happen. It's a "story." Why are you all going nuts. If you don't want to read non consent incest stories then why are you in this section of the website. Grow up. Quit your whining and move on.

Funny thing. Everyone wants to read (and probably jack off ) about stories of incest, yet they get so pissed when a guy writes about it. Get a life people, or change subjects.

All of you who equated the author with the character, well, you're all fucking stupid. The author is separate from the character so the author most likely did NOTHING that the character did. Fuck anyone who is so stupid to think otherwise.

If you don't like the story of a writer, DON'T READ IT. It is foolish to slam the author with any morality when you are on a website that pushes the boundaries of sex, including incest. Constructive criticism would be giving grammar and storyline suggestions. If the subject matter or they way it is portrayed offends you, again, don't read it and keep your unproductive negativity to yourself. It may be your "right" to chastise with such comments, but you only make yourself look bad, not righteous.

Very well written! It almost made me feel that it was real.

Concise and Sexy story. I found this story in Google and was cumming 5 minutes later while my 23 yo daughter was innocently sun baking on our deck 10 feet away. I couldn't believe I would take such a risk but the story lossened all my common sense lol. Great story

My darughter has some great pussy I have a stepdaughter and a darughter have sex with both of them I fuck my darughter first we were lovers before I met my wife me and my darughter slept in the same bed for about three years we have sex at night and in the morning she would get ready for school she told her best friend about having sex with me her best friend came over one weekend I told my darughter that I wanted to spend the weekend fucking she said that's why her friend was coming over for she wants her pussy fucked so that weekend I pop her friends cherry in front of my darughter and I fucked my darughter in front of her friend I since then got my darughter pregnant and still fuck her friend we've been screwing for three years now I've got four pussy I fuck all the time I'm trying to get my stepdaughter pregnant now that my darughters pregnant

I can not wait until you and your fiance split up and the judge hears all about your intentions. You will turn on one another so quickly and inform on the other's intention. Your child will be better off as a ward of the state or in foster care than being groomed as a lifetime sex abuse victim. Grooming a baby and child for the purpose of sex as an adult removes the consent part of the scenario. Obviously you are not intelligent enough to grasp such a concept.

There is a big difference between fantasy and reality, so you deserve for your uterus to be as barren as your brain. If you do end up cursing a child with having you as a parent then I take comfort knowing that many beautiful couples have very ugly children. I have seen ugly couples have children who turn out to be more beautiful than the children of attractive couples, so there is obviously very little you know about life.

Every time I read this story it drives me insane!!! Thank you for such amazing story!!

A second one pls

You need a part two when she gets her own room

A colleague of my wife was staying with us and once we were all in bed together. As night goes he carefully undressed her and solidly fucked her. Both were thinking I am completely unaware but the fact was I had arranged in such a way that she gets his while me beside.

That story is so fucking hot and I love the way he comes in his own daughters go pussy after she tells him not to

This story makea me cum e every time i reax it.

Author Needs To Continue This With

Another Chapter Or Two. Does Daddy

Get Her "Knocked Up" or Does She

Get In Her Own Bed the Next Night So

Tom Can Finish Fucking Her With Out

Daddy Getting "All Pissed Off, Because

His Sons Friend Is Getting A Great Piece

Of Ass."

I lot of the comments in these stories are from people with real problems. I can understand being turned on by forced sex if that's your thing (although it's not really my thing unless it's very mild), or by incest, whatever the form it takes for that person. But when you read this and honestly interpret it as "romance"? No. You're wrong, it's technically rape, and wrongful in any case. She didn't want it, the father was wrong to do what he was doing, realized he was wrong to do it. The author made that very clear, I think that was part of his turnon (either than or he was covering his ass). And not just wrong because it was his daughter, but wrong because he forced her.

You're also stupid and hypocritcal if you think stories like this should not be allowed. I mean "I like a good wholesome story about a father fucking his daughter, but these sick stories about rape should not be allowed!". They are both "sick". As long as they are just stories,it doesn't matter. Some people get off on weird, sick things. For some people, rape is that thing, and to want it banned because it isn't YOUR thing is just hypocritical. Even people who have fantasies you find disgusting have a right to have and share their stories with other people. I think the same ought to apply to all sorts of fetishes, but I see that people who are into the weirdest, sickest stuff can be just as judgemental of people writing about something they see as "wrong and sick" as the average person would be of them if they knew what kind of shit they like to read about. I mean seriously, you see people literally telling other people to go and kill themselves because they are sick perverts, when all that person did was write down the secret fantasies they have in their heads like other people do all the time. That's just bullshit. Yes, there are some things you just can't allow for legal reasons, but I think it's wrong to judge someone just because of something they can't help, if they never did anything to hurt anyone in real life. Intolerance is intolerance.

Lighten up Francis. Save you condescending preaching for your therapy group.

People read here for entertainment, escape, or just because that’s what gets them off.

I'm really looking foward to more of your work. Damn. it's so hot. You should write more

I came

My pussy hurts from cumming so hard to this story. Wish my daddy did that to me.

Wish any guy would do that to me. Rape sex fantasy is amazing, but rape sex with daddy is the best!

Please write more.

This story makes me come every time I read it

the story is a bit fucked up, but, yeah, were on a porn page so i guess its fine...

Step Daughter/Father works best in this scenario not real Blood Family relatives.