All Comments on 'Her Temptations'

Always glad to read another of your stories. I know some readers would want to kick the foolish wife out the door but I believe the husband took reasonable action in this case.

Boyd

Talked about a irrational forced whacko Forced reconciliation... are there numbers Low enough to show how wretchedly bad this story is??? .

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<b>The ending is fucking nightmare because the CHEATING ACT is NOT the god dam issue folks!!.</b>

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In order to believe the wife's absurd story... about being caught 3 times in situation that LOOKS like cheating but is NOT actual cheating... the husband

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FIRST he has to believe that his wife is so fucking stupid as to NOT Know what is really going but at the

SAME time smart enough NOT to fall for these pussy hounds " tricks"

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SECOND ...and far more importantly... the husband has to explain why after being caught twice... Even if she was innocent the last two events... she STILL went with Hubert!!!.

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That is just blantant hate loathing and disrespect

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The wife says "its all circumstantial". OK lets say she is correct. <b> WHY after the husband warning her NOT to go... after almost losing him twice before... was she STILL was leaving for the weekend?</b>

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The fact that Huberts wife is in the car DEFLECTS this aspect of the story but this idiot author does NOT explain how the husband gets past this.

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Instead what this idiot author ends this story by having the husband say " well the wife is stupoid but I guess she didnt cheat"....

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a really bad story.

I always enjoy your stories, especially since they are not in your native language and yet you do a decent job. I believe it deserves a bit more than a 75 and the 100 will make up some for the mudslingers who should quit reading the tales since all they do is wait for them to appear and leave bitter, nasty comments. Keep up the good work, Winterfrog.

Still good reading though. I agree with Harry that no wife really can be so naive or just plain stupid. As for the husband, having been close himself to what divorce can do to children, I suppose he is just acting responsible. If the 3rd time is the right time, it's high time for the wife to consider her actions and to find out why she's so easily tempted. Her actions for herself are so much in contrast to what her friend marie was saying that it was Jessica who made her stop her intentions to cheat on Eric, even if it was out of revenge. There must be some mental issue here to stick to rules that, obviously, are not so strickt for herself. So dear husband, I recommend you stay alert and prepared. Even if so far nothing has happened, it may in the future. Can you live with that. I guess yes, if only for the children's sake. And if you should happen to find out it did, at least you are prepared for the final goodbye. G.Belgium

Let me get this straight. She didnt intend to run off and see her ex? She didnt intend to meet with the choir director? And she went to go off for a weekend with a man who wanted in her pants but she didnt intend to let him get in? And all during this she was meeting with her employer out of work hours going to meals and such? That my friends is cheating and adultry, whether the sex act occurred or not. Were this my wife and this happened she would have been on the street looking for a place to stay.

<p>after all these years Harry remains a misogynist. Has no woman ever told the truth? Are all women just an affair waiting to happen? </p>

<p>Winterfrog's story is different from the standard fare on this site. That alone is enough to recommend it. I happen to be one who enjoys Winterfrog's way with words.</p>

<p>The story required a certain naivete on the wife's part. But these incidents didn't occur back to back to back. The story spanned 10 years or more. People get older but the rarely get smarter.</p><p> Right, Harry?</P>

do you read Winterfrog's stories? You say they are all crap, but still reads them. Most of them are quite good in fact, they are in comparison with many others, believable. It just could happen.

One day we all Hope that an idiot like TheBullet learns to how to read a story and can recall the plot. He said

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<i>after all these years Harry remains a misogynist. Has no woman ever told the truth? Are all women just an affair waiting to happen?</i>

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that question can ONLY be asked if you FORGET this was the 3rd time in 10 years this happened. The Bullet is arguing as if this only happened 1 time... and she didnt actually cheat...

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that question can only be asked if you FORGET that the wife believed Hubert and NEVER asked her husband first for an explanation.

Thanks for another good story. Keep writing what you enjoy.

I always find them interesting and fun to read. Acting stupid and cheating are two different things. If he wants to save his marriage and make it better than good for him. As in all marriages a little communication would go a long way, Thanks for the story.

I liked your story as a way of looking at how stupid people can act. Sure it is a bit over the top on naivety almost being retarded. Hey, I was entertained.<P>Thank you for your story and more to come. <P>PT

This is very unique and we almost always enjoy the creativity and effort that this author shares with us. In defense of Harry - he provides a similar unique gift in the way he analyzes these stories and points out the flaws and occasionally good things about the stories. His comments on other authors work is actually better than the story they submitted. Bonnietaylor and her idiot sidekicks could learn few things about how to channel their efforts into something worthwhile instead of the dog shit they put out.

Unlike most writers of loving wives this writers husbands/boyfriends always take no bullshit from the wife or girlfriend. I applaud that. Okay so some of the stories are a little far fetched so what! I would rather read about a couple fighting for their marriage rather than someone's wife of girlfriend or husband or boyfriend go out and become someones stud or slut. You won't find many wimps in winter frogs stories. I like it carry on writer.

the story for one thing no two. the husband isn't from out of the world and never hear or sees something. he has friends I mean real friend who tell him what's going on. Second he does not just wait until his marriage is in ashes, he acts before. I don't like the story because the wife is with all respect not worth a dime. she disrespects the judgement of her husband all the time. she allows others if employer or some chattering woman from town to have more influence on her than her family or good friends. And last but not least she is absolutely incapable of some serious communication with her husband. she rather believes anything and talks with her sister who does not even live in the same town. So the character of the wife is so bad you should have castrated her as soon as a doctor found out that she is dumb as a stone. only one intelligence quotient (IQ)point more and she would have been a vegetable. but who wants some vegetables as kids?

I especially loved this gem!.....

"But I presume you haven't noted that you are the next in his line and he is working hard on you. Nor suspected any reason for him to give you extra long lasting hugs and sometimes even caressing your butt. Or is it a normal behavior in that church?"

Great stuff!

<p>Harry, what part of the word 'incidents' (notice that funny squiggly letter on the end, often used in the English language to denote a plural) didn't you understand?</p>

<p>I read the story, and I even read it with an open mind. Your mind is so closed that I'm surprised any words slip out at all.</p>

<p>Nevertheless, I understood there were three 'incidents' (again note the squiggle). And I noted that the woman was more than naive. </p>

<p>But guess what, Harry. If the woman weren't naive, then we wouldn't have a story! She never would have had those three incidents and then you could have gone back into the bathroom and wanked yourself into obvivion without having the visual aide of a Winterfrog story.</p>

Or do y'all notice that Winterfrog is one of the coolest --- figuratively and literally --- northern Sandinavian writers here in Lit.? <p>

You can rant like Harry and I do, give him "00", and Winterfrog, unlike so many small writers here, does not delete comment posts.... I admire that in a grown up man who is willing to put his thoughts up to be read and criticized. <p>

I laugh soooo hard when "writers" delete comments that are critical of them --- but only because the reader doing that is so into the story, he/she feels emotionally attached to the story/characters [mean TELLS THE AUTHOR HE/SHE has done a good job in some ways] --- but leave a whole bunch of totally nonsensical, glowing ["you are the greatest writer ever!"], and unhelpful on their stories. <p>

For the showing of maturity, Winterfrog scores big points. <p>

I liked this story and gave it a "100," although it is not one of the author's best. This story's main focus was actually on NAIVETE, as opposed to cheating. So it has achieved that goal very decently. The story has no high level of intricacy or sophistication, like like the plumber and his naive wife. <p>

It, therefore, was a good story, although it didn't get hardcore cheating wives story readers' juices running.

more. Thanks for posting Winter Frog. As always if you post it it turns out pretty good and well worth reading. Keep posting.

And the narrator's take on things is always a bit over

the top. The fact that she stood around for the choir

director to play with her ass would be enough reason for me to want to get a divorce. No respect for her husband is just as bad as fucking around. I also find it interesting that these wives get angry when you point out some home-truths.

So I would write it different, but didn't and I thank Winterfrog for his time and effort. I enjoyed the result.

I enjoyed your story as always and I always look for more from you. Thank you for your time and effort.

An incident is something that happens once by chance. Had each of her stupid actions been but incidents one might say ok. When you plan something, arrange the situation, and have premeditated the actions one could hardly call it an incident. Three times this woman intented to have adulterous affairs, remember affairs do not require sex only intimate feelings, communications, and acts. This slut has mental and personality problems, she will promise her meal ticket anything so that she doesnt have to lower her lifestyle. You are right dabullet there were three incidents involving her lack of respect for her husband and her marriage. But they were not unplanned incidents like forgetting to put gas in the gas tank! 38

ur just not prolific enough. do u realize how long i had to wait for another of these gems? the only thing i would have liked is her explaining why gabe was fondling her ass. thanks lots, rc

St. Hood awaits any Author who can ignore the VA rambling Rantie whose objective seems to be his own ink.<P>

Author - I apologise for even mentioning him for thats what feeds his distorted mind. The problem is that occasionally that pig does find an acorn which inspires him to be even more irrational as well as frothing like an outboard motor.<P>

So it seems fruitless to even acknowledge him as his private hell must be immense and endearing to him.<P>

Its OK to voice a constructive comment as long as you first examine how the story would read without a human occasionally being a human - that is screwed up.<P>

Author - you need to know that you are greatly appreciated for your style, your directness, your imagination and many other worthwhile attributes but most of all your consistency. We are guaranteed that certain reasonable real to life situations will occur and that your hero while being human will react as a man or human most often should.<P>

You continuously deliver entertainment in an imperfect but human way and are greatly anticipated.<P>

With Very High Regard

I had to read this one twice to fully understand the plot, especially Jessica's jealousy during the third temptation. I think her character is quite credible - many women are as naive as Jessica. The husband's actions were consistent and credible. Well written and interesting story. Interesting comments also - Harry must have been OTR when he commented - unusually vitriolic even for Harry.

I like all of your stories. When I see your name I stop and take notice. Please keep writing and I will keep reading and enjoying. thank you for the story jrj

I thought you did a great job with this story. i had a like experience with my ex wife -only she did cheat. I found out by accident - her own mother saw her coming out of a motel followed by a guy , they kissed and left in seperate cars. Well my mother -in-law was so upset she called me and told me. After alot of yelling and screaming my wife finally did admit to the affiar-- we tired to work it out but never got back together after that - her lose the day after divorce became final I won 25 million dollars in the lottery. I bought my mother in law a new car as away of saying thanks.

You can't guard pussy. This isn't even your usual half-assed written cuck crap. This tale has taken it to a brand new level.

Your Heroine has no respect for her husband. She just wants to hide behind matrimony to "slut up". You never tear into someone in recovery as she did with her husband without some serious aftershocks.

Your Hero is gonna take the advice from a woman who admitted she wanted to cheat on her cheating husband?

Try to create full characters next time.

I never thought I would rate such a talanted author as winterfog whith such utter disdain.

The plot streatched the bounds of credibility far beyond any logical limit. I have nothing against wimp/cuckold stories and I know that they have quite a following but I believe in live and let live, each to their own. "The heroine" was not some poor naive girl as some believe and she didn't appear to be stupid, she was a cold calculating woman who wanted to be seduced and put up no resistance. Her disrespect to her husband was beyond anything a person would be expected to accept but he believed her not once but 3 times even when he was told by Hubert he was surprised how easy she was. I would like to hear your response to my critism. But as always thank you for your time and effort to entertain your stories are usually of an excellent quality.

I never thought I would rate such a talanted author as winterfog whith such utter disdain.

The plot streatched the bounds of credibility far beyond any logical limit. I have nothing against wimp/cuckold stories and I know that they have quite a following but I believe in live and let live, each to their own. "The heroine" was not some poor naive girl as some believe and she didn't appear to be stupid, she was a cold calculating woman who wanted to be seduced and put up no resistance. Her disrespect to her husband was beyond anything a person would be expected to accept but he believed her not once but 3 times even when he was told by Hubert he was surprised how easy she was. I would like to hear your response to my critism. But as always thank you for your time and effort to entertain your stories are usually of an excellent quality.

I never thought I would rate such a talanted author as winterfog whith such utter disdain.

The plot streatched the bounds of credibility far beyond any logical limit. I have nothing against wimp/cuckold stories and I know that they have quite a following but I believe in live and let live, each to their own. "The heroine" was not some poor naive girl as some believe and she didn't appear to be stupid, she was a cold calculating woman who wanted to be seduced and put up no resistance. Her disrespect to her husband was beyond anything a person would be expected to accept but he believed her not once but 3 times even when he was told by Hubert he was surprised how easy she was. I would like to hear your response to my critism. But as always thank you for your time and effort to entertain your stories are usually of an excellent quality.

I never thought I would rate such a talanted author as winterfog whith such utter disdain.

The plot streatched the bounds of credibility far beyond any logical limit. I have nothing against wimp/cuckold stories and I know that they have quite a following but I believe in live and let live, each to their own. "The heroine" was not some poor naive girl as some believe and she didn't appear to be stupid, she was a cold calculating woman who wanted to be seduced and put up no resistance. Her disrespect to her husband was beyond anything a person would be expected to accept but he believed her not once but 3 times even when he was told by Hubert he was surprised how easy she was. I would like to hear your response to my critism. But as always thank you for your time and effort to entertain your stories are usually of an excellent quality.

The wife is "Naive" and so everything is okay? Her 1st Naive mistake? She is going to spend a weekend with her ex-boyfriend until her live-in boyfriend puts his foot down? She saw nothing wrong with that? Her 2nd Naive mistake? She is warned about the guy in the choir repeatedly by her husband and yet she allows him to caress her butt. Her 3rd Naive mistake? She is warned that her new boss is just trying to seduce her with lies about her husband and she believes the guy anyway...and then she is going off with him in defiance of her husband's ultimatum that he will divorce her? This story does not justify a reconciliation Winterfrog! The way you explained it...the story says that she fully intended to cheat at least the very first two times until she was stopped by the husband!!!!! Then again the third time! You say that this wife loved and respected her husband? That is not the story that you have written! I think you really stretched the idea of reconciliation here didn't you? What if she gets "Naive" again for a fourth time and he doesn't catch her? Will that be a good sequel for a Wimp husband?

I have accepted that your stories will almost always have very naive women doing their best to get away with having sex for various reasons. At least your husbands are not wimps that will accept this behavior. I myself would not go to such lengths to keep my woman from cheating that many times, but I realize that is how you make your story interesting. I do agree that just letting them ruin your relationship when you know what is happening is aiding and abetting the cheaters. In reality, though not in your good stories, the second time she almost cheated after your warnings would have been enough for a man to know there was no respect for him. The third time where she wouldn't even check out what the player Harry had said...should have been the last time. Of course, I realize this is just a fiction and I love most all of your fiction stories of naive, wantabe cheating wives! Even Harry in VA does or he wouldn't read them all. You are the most interesting writer on lit! Keep your fun stories coming!

Are all men in Scandinavian countries so gullible, or is it just in your stories? If they are, I have a Golden Gate Bridge I will sell you (along with its tax lien).<P>

For goodness sake, the woman, Jessica, had to be damned near physically restrained on three different occasions from committing adultery, and she feeds her husband some childish bullshit and he takes her back (because she gave him a blow job?). What a man! Forgive three cheating episodes for a blow job!<p>

The whole episode regarding Marie and Eric was irrelevant to story, and was just smoke to cover the simpleminded, or maybe gutless, cave-in on the part of the husband.<p>

Your stories all seem to indicate that Scandinavian men are both shallow and without backbone. Scandinavian women, on the other hand, apparently can act as selfishly, or as disloyally as they wish with impunity.

Nuff said

I always like how your men will fight for their marriages instead of just watching it like a weakling with no self esteem.

Jessica was cheating with Gabriel, and with Hubert, but the husband prevented it reaching the full sexual level. With children on the scene, reconciliation was certainly the best result.

I greatly enjoyed the story.

He said if she left he would divorce. Then even though, when she left, she only went a few feet out the door; nevertheless she left and he didn't divorce her.

One problem with the writing is that it does not flow well. I am not good enough at writing to understand why but I can tell when I see it. It is like read a statement and pause and then read another statement all through the story. It kind of reminds me of telegrams in old movies where "say a few words" STOP "say a few words" STOP.

In any event I feel the story is good enough to warrant the my 4**** rating.

You certainly are fond of declarative sentences. I didn't see much in the way of ambiguity or nuance, and your tendency to play the moralist can be a little wearisome at times. But this is compensated for by your excellent proofreading and unfailingly accurate spelling and syntax. Many Literotica contributors woefully neglect this kind of discipline. I hope you continue writing.

She is weak, he is strong.She is naive..to say the least, he is intelligent. He is calm and stern, she cries, sobs and begs to be forgiven. That's a sciovinist dream. Non erotic, no good plot, just retro-brain masturbation. CRAP!

could only lead to false assumptions and heartbreak. TK U MLJ LV NV

no women who was almost seduced 3 times only stopped by his actions. is worth a THIRD CHANCE. how could he ever trust her

the slut should have been burned at the stake with no regrets. Only a wimp ass would take the slut back and god-only-knows how many of those assholes are "want-to-be-authors" on this site [sick fucks - like MattM, wantswhiteboys, and others].

cuckboys - friggin closetdwellers only happy when the hubby gets generous portions of creampie and sloppy seconds. WF had the damn pussy hound get his face clawed but always more fun when they get their balls kicked. oh well.

First, she shoulod have gone to her husband.

Second, she should have recognized the slimy boss as what he was.

Third, she had a crazy plan where almost everything could have gone wrong. I might have left her just for her stupidity. No more chances, three is too many! Yes, I know that it is just a story, not as entertaining as I wished. Too much angst.

I admit that after a year of reading you I have come too love the way you write. Don't always like your story but the writing is great. Really a stupid wife but you still get a 5

Cause she is one warped woman and i do not want someone else thinking that way to make her up lol

The stupidity is so bad it could be real - she is an idiot and needs to be led around by a keeper to protect her from her own foolishness - lol

Nice job thouhg thanks

to cheat THREE times, and the only reason she didn`t go through with it was because her husband was too smart for her and stopped it. Each time she was caught, she went straight out and tried again. This is a woman desperate to cheat, and she can`t be trusted. She will use anything as an excuse to cheat, so what is the point of staying married to her, when she has to be constantly watched and forced to remain faithful. How can he be in a happy marriage, when she has no respect for him, and when there is no trust? Divorce is the only option for him if he wants to be happy. If he has to be constantly vigilant in regard to his wife`s fidelity, that will lead to paranoia and lead him to hate her, which will destroy the marriage anyway, but with more acrimony, which will affect the children even more than a quick divorce. Divorce is sometimes better for kids, than living with two parents who constantly argue and hate each other.

This woman is going to cheat, she wants to. She has already tried 3 times and ignored her husbands warnings each time. It may be after an argument, after a rumor, or something else but she will find some excuse to cheat.

The husband is even stupider for taken her back. She would have cheated all 3 times if he didn't stop her, yet he took her back again and again. She said she loves him but I don't believe that for a minute. Actions speak louder than words. I understand there are children involved but sometimes a surgical ending is better than having the marriage bleed a slow and painful death. He should get while the getting is good.

In Winterfrog's tales there are no wimps. His Hubbies are proactive and take no mess. The quirky sayings such as "As sure as Amen in church" and others bring a slight levity to his stories. It usually isn't important in my enjoyment of his tales if they stay together or not as long as he dishes out his brand of rough justice and evens the score. Keep on writing Winterfrog!

Due to the children he probably has to stay married to her until the next time, he should let her go through with her stupid plans then.. If it were the real world instead of a story I would lay money that sooner or later she will find a reason to cheat. The attempt with the preacher was the worst, IMO. This last one, if she had just communicated with her husband, asked him about the damn strawberries etc. She would have cheated on him then and probably would have become a slut whore, she was already the slut but had not acted on her desires. Good story. If I ever get unmarried I will never marry again and I have a good wife. I would always be paranoid.

No way I stay with this wife. Three strikes, you're out. Her stories and excuses make no sense at all, it's like she's brain damaged or something. Whining about being the innocent party that 3rd time? Please! Dump this bitch and get a real wife, one that loves and values you. There's no future with this cow.

You caught her on 3 seperate occasions with 3 different men, planning to cheat & you forgive her coz you caught onto what she was planning before she could actually go through with the cheating. Give me a break, you are a FOOL

I like your stories. I enjoyed the writing but this story is truly flawed to the core. You can't picture someone in the way you picture the wife and make us believe than nothing happened and she loves her husband to death.

She did nothing to earn the right to reconciliate with her husband hence RAAC,

I enjoyed until the moment i saw that you were heading to reconciliation. Not because I'm against it but because in the case i wasn't going to work. You need to write al leat one more chapter explaining everything she did to deserve it.

Commited relationship

Ex boyfriend

Choir boy

Boss

This is her fourth chance

Don't agree,I think he should have divorced her.Three times he stopped her straying,so despite her promises how long before she strays again?.The least he should have done is make her sleep in the spare room and used her as a maid for the sake of the kids.

Your story deals with anger but the ending is weak by comparison

This was his third time preventing her cheating. How many chances does she need?

The story started with a real good wide intro and a beginning of a solid plot but then on the third page drifted into some "relationship" drivel and a ping-pong resolution "he said-she said-somebody said".

Prime example on how to start a good plot and then choke on it.

Not a good writing on this one.

Not one of Winterfrog's better offerings, I'm afraid. Even if we accept Jessica's delusional claim that because she never got as far as sexual intercourse with any of the three men she got involved in deceitful behaviour with, she never cheated, she still deserves to be dispensed with for being culpably stupid. her pea sized brain rattles around in her otherwise empty skull when she walks and she is therefore a disaster waiting to happen the next time she decides she's angry or humiliated about something. Meanwhile Marie tells the husband not to do anything stupid? Really?

Score dropped by two in the last two paragraphs and not because it turned into a RAAC, but because they reconciliation was by far the weakest part of the story.

That immature woman has a lot to learn. I have to wonder if she is capable of it. Still, an interesting story and I enjoyed the confrontation.

Agree with Tangledweed. Story went:

Weird, bad, angry, angry, angry, angry Poof! Everything's better and we're wonderful. There was nothing earned about the reconciliation. It happened because it was a bullet point on the plot outline, not because the story led there at all.

Divorce, end of story. So, a bridal shower was mentioned and then dropped. What happened? She constantly said she hasn't cheated - YET, not for lack of trying. Fail to understand why he would spend the rest of his married life waiting for other shoe to drop.

Lose...not loose.

Marie: "I'm sure that Jessica told you the truth. She didn't cheat you or even intend to do cheat you, but she acted as an incredible fool. I can't understand why she created that damn mess together with that horny Hubert instead of asking you a simple question. My only explanation is that she loves you very much and got humiliated and jealous when she heard the gossip. Please remember that a jealous woman is a dangerous woman."

===> Amen on the last sentence. Jessica was (for the most part) more dumb and naive than malicious.

A lot of the critics missed some of the complexities in the story (apparently). Kudos to thr MC for being proactive and vigilant and meeting things head on. Her first time with her ex, she came across as naive. She had no intention to cheat, but as she was in an exclusive relationship living together with MC, he told her how it was a deal breaker and she dropped it fast. Second time with Gabriel, the choir singer, was actually the biggest damage to their marriage in terms of trust. She was getting seduced. Failed to heed her husband's warning. Got angry when he made his accusations about Gabriel (and her). And only when Gabriel got beaten up and had gonorrhea and the Bergs got divorced, did she realize what an idiot she had been. That was her one real temptation that she was being seduced into and would have killed the marriage.

The stuff with Hubert was more complex. She surprised the MC when she walked out that Saturday morning. It was because he had much less information that he realized. He assumed Hubert was playing from a playbook off LW sites (only partially true as his real plot was more sinister), but Jessica was NOT playing from that playbook at all.

Yes she was naive with letting the snake take her to business lunches and compliment her on her wardrobe choices, but he was not anywhere close to getting into her pants with her consent. What the MC missed and what changed the perspective dramatically, is what she heard and believed (stupidly without questioning her husband) about his apparent betrayal with Madeline.

The husband had only a barebones sketch assuming LW story templates told him what was going on. He was absolutely wrong. Meanwhile as Marie pointed out, Jessica was bring irrational and stupid in her fury. Don't forget she was ready to file for divorce on the basis of what her friend told her and her insecurities about Madeline (his "dream girl" that got away). Her approach was driven by emotion and she thought she had it all figured out by staging a stunt to hurt her husband as part of getting revenge with him.

But he overreacted (in her opinion) and she was also clueless to the risk of Hubert, who almost certainly planned to rape her or drug her that weekend, then blackmail her to screw clients. Hubert was evil. Why his wife kept him around is beyond insane.

That being said, she had zero intent to cheat the third time. She wanted payback. But she was not wary of the snake, Hubert. Thankfully Marie was able to sort out all the relevant confirmations of Jessica's story, otherwise the MC would have divorced her.

The story wasn't perfect. Had some issues. But it was more creative than most LW stories with a couple of twists. Seriously her one big temptation was Gabriel, which the MC blew up. He shut her down on her ex. This third time she had her own flawed and irrational agenda to get payback on her husband for something he did not do. Hey itnis better than thr old "drug thr husband and have sex while with other.men which hubby is tied to a chair" revenge plot, as she had a misdirection planned with what she thought was a guaranteed escape plan (though inadequate). She really thought she had her bases covered. But confiding in Hubert was stupid, though he did try to talk her out of divorce, if only to have blackmail leverage on her after taking Jessica against her will.

Because of the creativity: 5 stars. Multiple commenters below seemed to miss the two perspectives of the MC and of Jessica, both incomplete or based on erroneous information. Without Johanna and her backing her up, she would be dead in the water. But to be fair, while stupid and irrational, her story made sense within her emotional and twisted mindset.

I have to say your first stories where not well written and hard to follow due to language differences. I am at the tail end of your list of tales and the improvement is great. In Scandinavia is there a reluctance to leave a cheating wife or husband as your writing in this and some other stories indicate that..3 times in this tale he stepped in to prevent her from cheating,it's simply not realistic that he would even think of keeping her..There are NO acceptable reasons/explanations for cheating or for near misses trying do so..JzK..