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Funny and Good
The end is hilarious. My side hurts. Very well done Marsh! The hot parts sizzle, what more can anyone ask?
Goodness!
So much sex for a MarshAlien story. I'm shocked, Marsh. Who knew you could be so naughty? Seriously, it's great. A fun read.
You are why I come to Literotica
I turn on my computer in the evening and start Internet Explorer. I go to Literotica and search for your listings. I am overjoyed to find a new story. If I don't find a new story, I re-read on of your older posts. I am especially fond of "Goin' Fishing". Keep up the good work.
Excellant
As always. 8BB
Awesome
Seriously Marsh, excellent work as always. I really like your erotic takeoffs of traditional stories, and obviously you don't have too much trouble adapting them to a more "real life" setting. I didn't get the whole "Judgement of Paris" thing until a few minutes after I read it. Please keep writing, it is seriously the best stuff on this site.
Fudge the sugar out of me!
I now have a new motto...
Super!!!
This was lotsa fun!!! Predictable ending but too fun to care. Love the last line!
asianToy
Loved it!
A sexy, funny romp! You probably think it's trivial, just something you tossed off for a change of pace, but I think it's a little jewel. Thank you for sharing it.
Amazing
Beautiful, hilarious, pure comedic 24 carat gold. Loved it, and I'm definitely gonna be coming back to reread this time and again.
I believe the term is 'holy fudge!'
Marsh, you genius! I know I said that Goin' Fishin' was delightful, but oh my goodness! I'm practically squealing over here! That was ADORABLE! I swear I knew Harris - one of my best friends a few years back was a Harris for sure. But enough about that, lets talk about the writing!
A well crafted piece from my quickly growing favorite short story writer, and one without copious flowery descriptors, nor a lack thereof. The perfect balance. Just tart enough to be nice, and just enough sugar to be perfect. You had maybe two grammar mistakes period and your punctuation was flawless (unlike a couple of your other stories).
Your characters were frightfully well developed for this short. I especially love the little bit of extra you put in with Ivy where, despite her proclaimed "nurturing" status, you still gave her a little bit of a kink. And fudge, Marsh, I swear you ripped those mannerisms of hers right from my Harris friend, too.
In two pages you made me almost forget two whole series of shorts about reporters and baseball jocks. ALMOST. But while I remember them, this is undoubtedly my favorite piece you have written. It's certainly litterotica, but it almost seems innocent regardless of the amount of sex!
If all the rest of your bits I have to read are this cute, I'll be happy to keep on powering through them!
- The Four Eyed Vampire
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