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by Anonymous08/14/08

A Story of Today UNTIL

The initial notification with an American Flag, no possible way no how. If you know nothing about a subject like this don't write.

A flag would be presented at a funeral or funeral ceremony if no body but never on a notification visit. Just the visit by a uniformed servicemember and a chaplain would have been sufficient for the ending, why add something that would not be done just to louse up your ending for a stoy line.

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by Anonymous08/14/08

yeah it needs a tweak but...

the comment was too harsh..you just need to fix the ending. It was a well told story with a haunting ending. But yeah, in this situation it needs to be fixed...good job overall though

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