All Comments on 'Alais's Settlement Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Excellent

More Please

bad_girl69bad_girl69over 15 years ago
Wonderful

I do hope you will continue to write more chapters faster :) I reallly need to know whats going to happen. I hope the next chapter, Alias is more excepting to her new husband. I just want them to find some kind of happiness with one another... you know.

Jolly_RogerJolly_Rogerover 15 years ago
Excellent

A first class story, I love the detail in your writing, The conflict Alais feels as she experiences her sexual awakening.

I hope there will be more chapters forthcoming.

SlaveNanoSlaveNanoover 15 years ago
Excellent

Loved the style of writing and the detail put into both setting the scene and descriptions. Will definately look forward to reading more. The only risk is that the format of submitting a chapter one at a time, part scene setting, part eroticism that is kind of forced on you can become stylised and your writing is too good to be put into this kind of straight jacket.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

is he demandinv her asshole?

loved the story write more pls

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