All Comments on 'Give Me Mo''

U JUMPED AROUND TOO MUCH TO MANY THINGS HAPPENING???????

i like this please write part #2

but I was confused. It jumped around so much I wasn't sure what was going on.

This has a lot of potential as a continuing story; but without the follow up story to give it context, it doesn't make sense that we went from Mo to Cierra in the middle like that, especially when it looked like Mo was going to get sorted out by Raheim earlier up.

The dialogue with Mo and Nia was good and believable, your language is entertaining and varied, but it really does need either extending to tie it all together, or a second chapter.

Content is not in the least attractive to think about. Language was crap. Using slang just shows stupidity , not how cool you are.