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by WickedEve08/15/08

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I'd change Par-tay-ing and cuddling. They seem out of the place in this poem. One's too cute and the other is too... well, it's too par-tay-ing. lol The rest of the poem is really good. :)

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by 08/15/08

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Sizzling poem, but I agree with Evie when she mentions "Par-tay-ing" "cuddling" in her comments. Good stuff and I mention your poem in the PF&D.

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by Naturemithya03/02/09

Gosh

Letting the alchemy of your poetry sink in I broke the thermometer while passing 100C.

Sorry I could not locate your writes before as I was new on the site.LOVED IT.

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by Sapphos Sister06/15/09

Turning Lead to Gold

And prose to poetry. Lovely poem. Evokes the wonder of new love.

Fx

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