All Comments on 'I Remember Bethany Ch. 01 (Illustrated)'

by rondori

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
No Thanks

Another slut story.

ebonygriotebonygriotover 15 years ago
Well illustrated and written

I don't agree with the previous review/comment, but respect the diversity of our preferences as readers.

Your initial narrative laid out some very clear indicators that the two main characters may have a preconcieved ideas about each other. The story then progresses to share aspects and likes of each perrsonalities while at the same time celebrates the sexual coming of age of Bethany. You takes time to show a real friendship building between the two.

This was a beautiful story of two people. Do I condone a married man getting his rocks off with another woman? no but I took time to read the story in it's setting, time and context. Your narrative feels authentic and the sex scenes were erotic and hot. Some of the pictures do make Bethany look afraid or even terrified and the angle of the images give an out of propostion set of balls, but hey its fiction right! I'll look out for the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Something Different~could have been true?

Needed to be more tense...like 'What if they got caught?'

The pics were great but not clear enough to 'WOW'a person.

Just about the best...ask an editor to see what I mean.

Loved the amount of luscious illustrations...could have wished for more?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
lol

Ur not an artist

rondorirondoriover 13 years agoAuthor
to Anonymous

And you sir are not a critic; or at least not a literate one.

rondorirondoriover 13 years agoAuthor
link to my book

You can download the first 50% for free

http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/26448

misterjack888misterjack888over 12 years ago
Simply wonderful

Rondori,

What a great love story with sexy as hell illustrations. Super!

Jack

SuribinderSuribinderover 7 years ago
Love these illustrations and the story that goes with them

Love interracial period pieces. Especially one with so many dimensions. Please tell me there are more illustrations like these. Who is the artist?

rondorirondoriover 7 years agoAuthor
I am the artist

My website:

http://rondoriseroticrealm.yolasite.com/

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
sheeeeeiit yeh

boney maroonie speaks again

tazz317tazz317about 3 years ago
A GOOD REBOUNDER ALWAYS GETS A BUCKET

especially when the opposition tries for. a lay-up. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

SO much fact weaved in with the story that is wholly or part fact. I was stationed at Ft. Carson in the early sixties and was on evacs to Fitz in those days. I had relatives in Denver and spent a lot of time there and was at Fitz for several weeks altho stationed with AMEDS USAH (Rose Army Hospital). Great story and sensual and descriptive. Thanks you, Aragana

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