Anticipation... D.G. - I have always enjoyed everythng you have written, and now this coming few days sounds like I have a good week in store. Thank you so much for doing something for and about both the young men and women we have in our Armed Forces, and it appears you will be doing something for the wives, husbands, girlfriends, boyfriends and families of those who serve our nation. I personally am a crusty old fart who is now too old, too bald, too fat and maybe too mean to properly represent our nation in light of today's seeming need for the political correctness bullshit, but if a military bus pulled up out front and someone came in and said "Prof, we need you NOW!", I'd be gone in a heartbeat. D.G., thanks in advance for the story, and to any and all service people who may read this, "THANK YOU for being there". Very Sincerely, Prof. Ramstein.
Lots of authors and very few good stories. Keep writing, keep posting DG. It seems like every other story is about some black guy wanting a white women or some gay married guy wanting his wife to cheat. Your the last of a dieing breed DG. Keep the faith brother, don't change. LOL
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Anonymous08/17/08
Another great story
It's kind of funny about literature. I never met Techsan or spoke with him. But I read the stories he posted and many he edited. I feel like a friend has passed. I guess writing DOES bring a form of immortality after all.
Above all, please keep writing and posting your stories. Other authors may write about incredible sex or amazing and magical creatures, but you tell stories about people -- the sort we see in real life and can care about. That makes your writing true magic.
as usual. Just too long since your last entry. Thanks for the great stories
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Anonymous08/17/08
Can only agree
It's good to read you stories, they're so close to ordinary people in everyday's life. Thanks. G.Belgium
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Anonymous08/17/08
Looks like
another great story story from DG is starting,and I look forward to reading the rest of it.
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Anonymous08/17/08
Very nice, human start to story
I don't recall reading any of your previous stories, but I will definitely give them a try. Yes, I read Literotica for the sex, but I also want to read about characters I can care about - not just another porn flick on paper. As an over 20 years Navy retiree, I can empathize with the main character. I look forward to the future chapters.
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Anonymous08/18/08
Wonderful
I always enjoy your stories. They have a quality about them and you have a way of making the characters come to life.
I look forward to the next installment.
You have lived up to my expectations with this one so far. Keep it up.
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Anonymous08/19/08
Real Characters--- Nice Job.....
Thanks for writing about characters people can relate to. I know Lit is an Erotic Tale site, but after a while you just get tired of stories about oversized genitalia and libidos that make folks nuts. This looks to be a well crafted, main stream tale and I want to say "thanks in advance" for writing it.
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Anonymous08/20/13
So Moving
This story was so moving and it brought tears to my eyes just reading it.
English
You Are Going To Make My Week!!
Anticipation... D.G. - I have always enjoyed everythng you have written, and now this coming few days sounds like I have a good week in store. Thank you so much for doing something for and about both the young men and women we have in our Armed Forces, and it appears you will be doing something for the wives, husbands, girlfriends, boyfriends and families of those who serve our nation. I personally am a crusty old fart who is now too old, too bald, too fat and maybe too mean to properly represent our nation in light of today's seeming need for the political correctness bullshit, but if a military bus pulled up out front and someone came in and said "Prof, we need you NOW!", I'd be gone in a heartbeat. D.G., thanks in advance for the story, and to any and all service people who may read this, "THANK YOU for being there". Very Sincerely, Prof. Ramstein.
Its great to see your name on a new post.
Lots of authors and very few good stories. Keep writing, keep posting DG. It seems like every other story is about some black guy wanting a white women or some gay married guy wanting his wife to cheat. Your the last of a dieing breed DG. Keep the faith brother, don't change. LOL
Another great story
It's kind of funny about literature. I never met Techsan or spoke with him. But I read the stories he posted and many he edited. I feel like a friend has passed. I guess writing DOES bring a form of immortality after all.
Above all, please keep writing and posting your stories. Other authors may write about incredible sex or amazing and magical creatures, but you tell stories about people -- the sort we see in real life and can care about. That makes your writing true magic.
awesome
as usual. Just too long since your last entry. Thanks for the great stories
Can only agree
It's good to read you stories, they're so close to ordinary people in everyday's life. Thanks. G.Belgium
Looks like
another great story story from DG is starting,and I look forward to reading the rest of it.
Very nice, human start to story
I don't recall reading any of your previous stories, but I will definitely give them a try. Yes, I read Literotica for the sex, but I also want to read about characters I can care about - not just another porn flick on paper. As an over 20 years Navy retiree, I can empathize with the main character. I look forward to the future chapters.
Wonderful
I always enjoy your stories. They have a quality about them and you have a way of making the characters come to life.
I look forward to the next installment.
You are the best....
or rather my preferred writer...
The start is very interesting and a bit
surprising. Those kids will be the glue in the future!
Great start!
Love the returning Vet. and "damsel in distress" start to this one. Bet I'll like it all. You do have a great way of telling a story. Thanks DG.
ONE DOWN FOUR TO GO
with another great story by dghear. You are one of the best. Thank you for sharing your talents.jrj
Anytime I see your name, I know I want to read.
You have lived up to my expectations with this one so far. Keep it up.
Real Characters--- Nice Job.....
Thanks for writing about characters people can relate to. I know Lit is an Erotic Tale site, but after a while you just get tired of stories about oversized genitalia and libidos that make folks nuts. This looks to be a well crafted, main stream tale and I want to say "thanks in advance" for writing it.
So Moving
This story was so moving and it brought tears to my eyes just reading it.
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