All Comments on 'Jack, The Man Who Was Invisible'

hope to see more of this soon!

fantasy the rest of the story is un-necessary. We know what is going to happen next--But I love it anyhow

...or hate, yet, but it is predictable.

He wrote this story. He got a puter. He typed. He started every sentence with he. He sucks.

And, he (the author) did not start every sentence with it. It was a good introduction to what just might be a very entertaining series. I'm anxious to see what sort of trouble Jack gets into...and, as he's only 19, he is certain to have a lot of trouble. Hell, at almost three times his age, if I could suddenly be invisible, I'd probably find more than my share of trouble, as well.

This isn't going to be a long drawn out story is it. You have a shot at a good one don't ware it out.

so far so good... wouldn't he have been able to see through his own eyelids though?