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Poem for Darius Barney

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by The_Frank_Black08/16/08

disturbing, maybe

but why not write about something that is not beautiful, or perfect. I find this an interesting character study, as pitiable as the subject may be. You did not mention, is he happy or does that matter?

maybe, maybe not

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