Charlie's Naked Proposal Ch. 02

Fantastic

Just a wonderful story with hot sex, a little romance and strong scenarios. Now if there were only a third chapter, then it would be perfect. Hands down one of my favorites on this site, and one of your absolute best.

Another one of your top works.

I don't know if I commented on this great story the first three times I read it. It ranks very high on your list of great stories. Sex, humor, all that good stuff. If you ever write another chapter make sure that Dad gets something more than milk. Thank you for writing.

needs a seguel

excellent story great subject, but needs more needs a sequel like 1 or 3 more or more !!!!!

seriously needs a sequel

it was hot and sexy and defintely needs to continue

FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks for this excellent story!

could have been a brilliant story

but Sophie was a cheating fuck slut whore to treat her husband like that....probably why he decided to leave the nest....mother is also a cheating fuck slut whore to her husband and getting pregnant to her son....shows she has absolutely no respect for her husband......the son is just a cock happy bastard...pity no one found out about the fire and put his ass in jail.....now he has all the women to fuck and keep happy...it will never last...they will soon be looking for more cocks to please them...on the one hand a good story and funny in places but on the other...two cheating sluts who cuckolded their husbands....not a nice thing to do

A matter of dissagrement

I like most others do not agree with anonamous. Was an excellent story just needs follow up.keep up the good work.

bloody good story

good descriptions of the Nude Day meetings -- a sequel would be splendid, of course pp John

More please!!!

Chapter three is begging to be told, and it should bring Jenny into the family.

You're a gem, Scouries.

Among the many writers here who can't keep verb tense straight, and wouldn't know a comma if it bit them in the ass, your contributions are invariably well written and supremely entertaining.

And to your few detractors who feel obliged to condemn women who have sex outside of their marriages as "cheating fuck slut whores," my advice is, "Lighten up, Francis. It's a stroke story."

I suspect they themselves had partners who cheated on them. What these bitter cucks fail to understand is that, more often than not, infidelity is the RESULT of marital problems - not the CAUSE of them.

Good story

I only don't like the ending.You basically changed Charlie into an asshole and a hypocrite. He calls Graham's family animals and the experience horrible while fucking his own 2 sisters and his mother. And why would Graham have problems with incest? He grew up with it.
I don't mind that you wanted an ending with Charlie fucking his mother and sisters its just the way you got to it that bothers me.

like the story

Ok, so I only got to the part where mom fucked him when I came. Normally it's the build up and seduction that do it for me...and this story scored high with that! Found the recurring camera references kinda juvenile and not necessary. ..but hey, that's just me. Found the impregnating a but overboard too, but the whole request to nurse and subsequent nursing discussion way hot. In the end, it was a sexy, fun, fantasy that I'm glad you shared.

Charlie isn't a Hypocrite

He didn't want his child raised in the commune. He didn't tell his father what happened @ the wedding so he sure couldn't tell him that his oldest daughters child was his. So he did the next best thing. He fed his father's Phobia. It worked for me Good Job as usual Keep on Keeping On!

One More

You know this needs more chapters you had some excellent stories that you cut a little short like Emily's Christmas Milk.I sent him a message folks wondering if he is still among the living .I am getting a little old and infirm myself so I wonder.

Very mixed story --

Wellwritten as usual, but the nudist part was unpleasant and not believable. The entire story was forced and unnatural. Poor Graham. He didn't stand a chance. Still, he and his family don't seem too great.

All together, a very mixed piece of work.

Ah-Ha

Charlie's no hypocrit. He knew exactly what he was doing when he spoke of how terrible it was. Just like makeing love with Sophie, he was planting seeds. He needed for his father to want Sophie back home more than he disaproved of his son in law. Graham's attitude is easily understood. Its one thing to watch other people shareing your relatives, one thing to have sex even with them. But to watch your wife doing it with someone else and knowing what he, himself was thinking when he was doing it - well thats another thing. Charlie is an admirable character. Family before everything else. He didn't try to replace or belittle his father, even though he had secretly replaced him in his mother's arms. Never let his father know what he and his sisters were doing. He let his dad believe what he needed to believe and simply love his family. Maybe Dad will try Mother's milk and maybe not. Scouries left it up to the reader to decide.

dynamite

I love this story it should have a sequel you have lots of great works

Great story needs sequel

Almost

This WAS a great story. Up all the way till the end, but then you suggested the idea of a 5 way with Dad. I kind of lost my building cum at that point. I was about to go back and re-read some 'inspirational passages' until I came to that. I don't think more chapters are needed. The bimbos at the commune are forgotten, the Poole's will welcome Graham home - but he'll probably be less enthusiastic about commune life and 'free love' after watching his wife getting boned by her brother. Dad is interested in being a great lawyer and in being a Dad again, but probably not very much into sex anytime soon. Charlie and Isabel have transformed their future. Mom will happily be Mom to Charlie's daughter and so will Sophie. So I think their stories are told and wrapped up pretty well. Just don't write Dad into a menage a troi's. He isn't suited for it. And who knows, as bossy as Izzy is she might just become 'Mistress Isabel'.

Good story

Looking for the next installment!

Loved the humor

Great story! Loved the humor, the characters and their obvious love for one another. More please

I always read this when I come across it. A favorite.

I have told you before, Jim. You are in my top five authors here on Literotica. Thank you again for all your stories and writings. I believe that this is my favorite of all your stories. His Mom is a jewel.

dynamite read

I love this story first time I came across your work I passed over this set of stories but then after reading just about all of them I decided to read this and it turned out to be my favorite one of your works

Oh so many options...

Talk about leaving things wide open for additional sequences, please do not stop now. Will look for more chapters in this well written and fun to read story.
Thanks for your efforts!

Likey

Theys a few stories I got to read ever time I see em. this is won. Izzy come out to be a firer kracker in bed didn't she. Mommy and daddy both got there baby they been wanton. Daddy learnt that even a big time lauwyer don't need to no ever thing. Sone stuff better not heard. if you hear sometn tat you wish you didn't it is real hard to un hear it. sophie got her brothers baby and her freedom from Graham after get to sew her wild oats for awhile at the house of the rising sun. Charlei is getting babies. First daughters an probably later sons to do them when theys grown up. Ever bodies happy. Graham showed that even folks with opened up minds can ony go so far.

would love to experience this

it was a very good read, in fact one of the best. kept ones interest thru the entire story