That had more incest in it than the Bible. Much more sensual descriptions, too. God, you're good. Thank you Lord this author doesn't adhere to what appears to be the prevailing literary philosophy on this site of mass-producing multi-chapter stories with little or no sex. NO SEX ON A PORN SITE? Heaven forbid! This story is all familial SEX, SEX, SEX! Oh, it's funny too. The dialog is hilarious. I was laughing all the way.
by
Anonymous08/18/08
more!!!
this is so hot.more chapters please!
by
Anonymous08/18/08
5 CUMS
ER I MEAN STARS
by
Anonymous08/18/08
Oh yeahhh
Got me off good.Thats what Im here for
by
Anonymous08/19/08
Yes this was a very interesting story
A very well written story and the sex was good toooooo..
by
Anonymous08/19/08
Working up an Appetite
Got a raging thirst for mother's milk but no one in the family lactating. Guess I gotta knock somebody up. Been avoiding that up to now but since Dad got a vasectomy it's up to me. Mom and both sisters are ready candidates and to be sure I'm gonna plant my seed in all three--several times.
loved the 2nd chapter as much as the first, but hey.. Penn is a much better school than boring old Yale and harder to get into these days!! yeah yeah.. I am biased ;)
by
Anonymous08/21/08
The Best is Yet to Cum! from jim
This has got to be your best one; yet, there is room to grow. The depth, you use, is greater than any I've seen for a long time; but you can go deeper yet. It would be like straining the cervix instead of just hitting the G-spot.
Although some may think this is enough, you can go into more detail during the encounter; sort of like building to a climax. Share EACH lovers emotions AND feelings with the readers. Let them feel what it is like to go beyond their mental limitations; to feel it themselves. Each thrust going deeper than the previous; making each reader feel it going deeper; making them ache for release, until they can contain it no more; finally exploding their minds into a mental orgasm of their own; just as the lovers drench each other into oblivion; washing each other with their own enjaculation. 'The Best is Yet to Cum'. jim
by
Anonymous08/26/08
hurry
Seemed more rushed than the first chapter. For the contest you had more substance. Humor was void in this chapter. Chapter one I thought about for weeks. This one wasn't bad but forgettable.
by
Anonymous09/16/08
An invitation...
This is a message to all of scouries' adoring fans. I implore you to come to his thread on the Author's Hangout and defend his honor. It will only take a moment to sign out user name, then you can come and defend him IN PERSON and tell all the other authors what an amazing man he is. Perhaps before you do all this, however, you should read through many of the posts there. You may or may not change your mind about defending him and his good name. Signing out a user name doesn't take much and you don't need to reveal anything about yourself that you don't want. Please, take the time to see what kind of a person scouries is, I bet he'd appreciate the support. Here's the link: http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=51502 9
by
Anonymous11/28/08
Wonderful
That was a great story,....Dear Jim please do not stop. I am waiting for the next episodes.
by
Anonymous01/26/09
A Delightful Sense of Humor
Jim: You are one great author. I enjoy your sense of humor especially. I have been reading stories on Literotica for some 2 years now and you have shown more potential than anyone I have read before. Keep it up, Mike.
by
Anonymous02/26/09
nice!
This is the first time I ever left a comment. This was so HOT! Can we make a continuation? Perhaps they convince pops like they did the husband except he tried it? Make a pretty hot double drillin orgy ;) We wanna see Izzy get knocked up too. Please dont stop
What I want to know is will there be a 3rd installment? One where Izzy gets pregnant? Does dad join in on the milking?
I would love another chapter.
by
Anonymous03/05/09
Super-Duper!
These two episodes were the best of anything that I've read so far. I even made myself wait for two days in between to increase the thrill of anticipation!
by
Anonymous03/24/09
what a stud!
In another brilliant story from this author we find young Charlie, a very intelligent guy, with an overload in his young potent balls that has to be released, involved with his very closest female family! There's his older sister, his very own mother, and his saucy kid sister, all of whom Charlie has fuck plans for! All the family females know about Charlie's outsized dick and heavy balls, and are deeply stirred! The cocky bastard makes sure to fuck babies up the cunts of all three--his older sister before her wedding, his own mother before she gets together with her new wimp husband, and his cute kid sister--all of them now carrying Charlie's babies! Charlie is one of the proud heroes of all sister-humping and motherfucking annals! There should be statues of him with his big stiff triumphant dick and heavy hanging balls, and his sisters and mothers with their fat pregnant bellies all over the place! This young man is an icon for bold family fuckers everywhere!
I loved this story, both chapters, and the fact that you plan to add dad into the next one is awesome. These are the first stories i have read of yours and I must admit i will be looking for more of your work in the days to CUM. Thank you for an inspirational story to help me through a very HARD moment in time.
...your genius continues to amaze me. I almost passed over this tale, until I saw Scouries at the mast head. And it was more than worth it. As a once-published author to be, I stand in awe at your ability to word smith such tales. Please don't retire anytime soon! Thanks, again! Jim
by
Anonymous04/07/09
one of the best
wow what a story full of love. one of the best stories i read.
by
Anonymous04/11/09
.....just outstanding.......
....i felt like i was there....such a talent you are.....
by
Anonymous04/23/09
Great Story
This was one of the best. I hope you will write a Chapter three or more.
Thanks for a great story.
by
Anonymous05/28/09
WHAT I WANT TO KNOW IS.....
What happened to Charlie and Izzy? Did they finally have moments together outside of the bedroom without others joining in or being around? If he loved her so much, why was she not his primary interest? It seems as if he loved all the women in his family equally although, the story did try to make it seem as if he loved Izzy more. I want to know what happens next. Please continue the story.
I really loved this story, It is an all around top
An all around top of the line story.It has it all, really erotic sex, funny , drama and lots of love. The boy is going to have a flock of kids before he reaches 30 years old, with three women to keep pregnant. Mom is the only one that the clock is starting to run down, so he will have to work hard to keep her knocked up. From 41 to 18 that's a hell of a selection of pussy to pick from. Great story Thanks.......Rich
by
Anonymous10/19/09
pretty wild ...
... and crazy !!! The family that loves together stays together !!
R
by
Anonymous11/26/09
Yet again another brilliant story
that moves at a tantalizing pace so much so you have to keep on reading it to find out what happens next. Really enjoyed it despite the fact he cuckolds his own father - he is going to worn to a frazzle having to keep up with three highly sexed women popping babies out one after the other. Leaves you fantasizing about the future and wondering if and when his dad will get involved - well done - you are one of the handful of writers on here who can tell a darn good story without everyone having to fuck from beginning to end.
Yes, indeed I had read this story previously, and now I wonder if it was on....
this site or elsewhere, because there was no comment on either story from me, and I'm trying to leave a mark, so I don't repeat reads. Regardless, I DID repeat this one and was glad I did. I guess it is a fantasy of many males to covet a female and be able to take her. Dreams for some do come true. There were a few odd statements. For example:
"They're animals dad ... it was ... just horrible," I finally admitted.
"Worse than you could ever imagine," I added as I shook my head.
Some hours later I slipped into my sister's room. I was naked. I bent down and picked her naked form from the bed and then, with her cradled in my arms, started towards the door. "And don't think you can pretend you're asleep this time Izzy," I warned as I started up the stairs to my room.
"You're sleeping with me from now on, understand?"
It was our first night alone together. The first of what we both knew would be thousands. We took our time. Explored every inch of each others body.
Then fucked hard!
"Charlie, you shouldn't... Maria might see," she started to admonish when I wrapped my arms around her from behind and bent and kissed her.
I carried her to her bedroom. Made love to her.
"I'll never leave him... I love him," mom whispered as we lay panting side by side later.
And, I think Charlie said to his Dad, "They're animals, Dad." Mmmmmm. Fucking every female in the family is not animalistic? Well, it makes for a good story line, an erotic tale, and it begs for more. I'm waiting for Mom's and Sophia's daughters to grow to 18 so Dad Charlie or is it Grand Dad Charlie can impregnate more of the family. Let's see he'd be about 37. And then if those girls had more girls that grew to 18, Charlie at about 56 could father even more. The real story would see Charlie at age 75 fathering one more set of girls. Maybe somewhere along the line there would be another Charlie birthed so that the fantasy could continue forevermore. Soon they would have enough members that they could start their own commune, Charlies' Nude Group, and they could always invite Graham back for that one special Nude Day each year. Great story Jim. Hope these characters will be back!
Probably the best incest story. Tying the nudist colony with the incest was a brilliant idea. The ending was a little slow, but the total product was excellent!
by
Anonymous10/11/10
Absolutely the best incest story.
Thanks for a great effort, I had a stroke while reading,
then another and another, made a mess. Hehehehehehe.
by
Anonymous10/15/10
great story
great story hope to see more thanks
by
Anonymous02/13/11
Great read
Really enjoyed the series. Would love to read more.
by
Anonymous02/15/11
A masterpiece
Outrageous and hilarious and loving and so enjoyable
I totally agree with anonymous below me however something was left out. So I add this ---- but so, so, so incomplete!
by
Anonymous04/25/11
Develish...!
i wasn't really in the mood this moment for anything literotica....
but ur story had me going! my wife couldn't understand what's up with my sudder vigor!
thanks for the submission!
I got abs from laughing so hard while reading this story.
My heart melt from the love radiating from the family.
My dick hurts so good from busting one huge load of juicy thick semen.
Wonderful story. Please continue writing. You are a talented author and will always get my vote.
Now for the partial negative comment. Even though I really don't like unfaithful spouses being it the wife or husband, you made it fit quite since I didn't give a shit for Graham by the end of the story.
There got to be a part 3 in you head some where. lol
and the sex seens were to short especially when hes with hes mother and both of his sisters we need more details. =(
You definitely wrote another one for my favorite list here.
by
Anonymous08/12/12
brilliant
it was a very good story . only, i'm kind of a one-woman kind of guy so i thought it would had been best for charlie and isabel to be exclusive by the end...
English
good work
nice second chapter and i loved it. keep up the good work.
You should stick to your thread
There's more entertaining fiction there than this.
GREAT
ANOTHER GREAT STORY. Got to have More
Wow!
That had more incest in it than the Bible. Much more sensual descriptions, too. God, you're good. Thank you Lord this author doesn't adhere to what appears to be the prevailing literary philosophy on this site of mass-producing multi-chapter stories with little or no sex. NO SEX ON A PORN SITE? Heaven forbid! This story is all familial SEX, SEX, SEX! Oh, it's funny too. The dialog is hilarious. I was laughing all the way.
more!!!
this is so hot.more chapters please!
5 CUMS
ER I MEAN STARS
Oh yeahhh
Got me off good.Thats what Im here for
Yes this was a very interesting story
A very well written story and the sex was good toooooo..
Working up an Appetite
Got a raging thirst for mother's milk but no one in the family lactating. Guess I gotta knock somebody up. Been avoiding that up to now but since Dad got a vasectomy it's up to me. Mom and both sisters are ready candidates and to be sure I'm gonna plant my seed in all three--several times.
deliciously humorous
loved the 2nd chapter as much as the first, but hey.. Penn is a much better school than boring old Yale and harder to get into these days!! yeah yeah.. I am biased ;)
The Best is Yet to Cum! from jim
This has got to be your best one; yet, there is room to grow. The depth, you use, is greater than any I've seen for a long time; but you can go deeper yet. It would be like straining the cervix instead of just hitting the G-spot.
Although some may think this is enough, you can go into more detail during the encounter; sort of like building to a climax. Share EACH lovers emotions AND feelings with the readers. Let them feel what it is like to go beyond their mental limitations; to feel it themselves. Each thrust going deeper than the previous; making each reader feel it going deeper; making them ache for release, until they can contain it no more; finally exploding their minds into a mental orgasm of their own; just as the lovers drench each other into oblivion; washing each other with their own enjaculation. 'The Best is Yet to Cum'. jim
hurry
Seemed more rushed than the first chapter. For the contest you had more substance. Humor was void in this chapter. Chapter one I thought about for weeks. This one wasn't bad but forgettable.
An invitation...
This is a message to all of scouries' adoring fans. I implore you to come to his thread on the Author's Hangout and defend his honor. It will only take a moment to sign out user name, then you can come and defend him IN PERSON and tell all the other authors what an amazing man he is. Perhaps before you do all this, however, you should read through many of the posts there. You may or may not change your mind about defending him and his good name. Signing out a user name doesn't take much and you don't need to reveal anything about yourself that you don't want. Please, take the time to see what kind of a person scouries is, I bet he'd appreciate the support. Here's the link: http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=51502 9
Wonderful
That was a great story,....Dear Jim please do not stop. I am waiting for the next episodes.
A Delightful Sense of Humor
Jim: You are one great author. I enjoy your sense of humor especially. I have been reading stories on Literotica for some 2 years now and you have shown more potential than anyone I have read before. Keep it up, Mike.
nice!
This is the first time I ever left a comment. This was so HOT! Can we make a continuation? Perhaps they convince pops like they did the husband except he tried it? Make a pretty hot double drillin orgy ;) We wanna see Izzy get knocked up too. Please dont stop
Great Story
What I want to know is will there be a 3rd installment? One where Izzy gets pregnant? Does dad join in on the milking?
I would love another chapter.
Super-Duper!
These two episodes were the best of anything that I've read so far. I even made myself wait for two days in between to increase the thrill of anticipation!
what a stud!
In another brilliant story from this author we find young Charlie, a very intelligent guy, with an overload in his young potent balls that has to be released, involved with his very closest female family! There's his older sister, his very own mother, and his saucy kid sister, all of whom Charlie has fuck plans for! All the family females know about Charlie's outsized dick and heavy balls, and are deeply stirred! The cocky bastard makes sure to fuck babies up the cunts of all three--his older sister before her wedding, his own mother before she gets together with her new wimp husband, and his cute kid sister--all of them now carrying Charlie's babies! Charlie is one of the proud heroes of all sister-humping and motherfucking annals! There should be statues of him with his big stiff triumphant dick and heavy hanging balls, and his sisters and mothers with their fat pregnant bellies all over the place! This young man is an icon for bold family fuckers everywhere!
Fulfilling Story...
I loved this story, both chapters, and the fact that you plan to add dad into the next one is awesome. These are the first stories i have read of yours and I must admit i will be looking for more of your work in the days to CUM. Thank you for an inspirational story to help me through a very HARD moment in time.
Mr. Scouries,
...your genius continues to amaze me. I almost passed over this tale, until I saw Scouries at the mast head. And it was more than worth it. As a once-published author to be, I stand in awe at your ability to word smith such tales. Please don't retire anytime soon! Thanks, again! Jim
one of the best
wow what a story full of love. one of the best stories i read.
.....just outstanding.......
....i felt like i was there....such a talent you are.....
Great Story
This was one of the best. I hope you will write a Chapter three or more.
Thanks for a great story.
WHAT I WANT TO KNOW IS.....
What happened to Charlie and Izzy? Did they finally have moments together outside of the bedroom without others joining in or being around? If he loved her so much, why was she not his primary interest? It seems as if he loved all the women in his family equally although, the story did try to make it seem as if he loved Izzy more. I want to know what happens next. Please continue the story.
I really loved this story, It is an all around top
An all around top of the line story.It has it all, really erotic sex, funny , drama and lots of love. The boy is going to have a flock of kids before he reaches 30 years old, with three women to keep pregnant. Mom is the only one that the clock is starting to run down, so he will have to work hard to keep her knocked up. From 41 to 18 that's a hell of a selection of pussy to pick from. Great story Thanks.......Rich
pretty wild ...
... and crazy !!! The family that loves together stays together !!
R
Yet again another brilliant story
that moves at a tantalizing pace so much so you have to keep on reading it to find out what happens next. Really enjoyed it despite the fact he cuckolds his own father - he is going to worn to a frazzle having to keep up with three highly sexed women popping babies out one after the other. Leaves you fantasizing about the future and wondering if and when his dad will get involved - well done - you are one of the handful of writers on here who can tell a darn good story without everyone having to fuck from beginning to end.
great story
Naughty very naughty but what a read it had me doing things to myself that a respactable married woman shouldn't do that's for sure, wonderful
wow
yet another Great story from you. your my fav auther here ty.
great
a story that has a start and end.with a good deal of sex added,but how did dad get to be so dumb
Yes, indeed I had read this story previously, and now I wonder if it was on....
this site or elsewhere, because there was no comment on either story from me, and I'm trying to leave a mark, so I don't repeat reads. Regardless, I DID repeat this one and was glad I did. I guess it is a fantasy of many males to covet a female and be able to take her. Dreams for some do come true. There were a few odd statements. For example:
"They're animals dad ... it was ... just horrible," I finally admitted.
"Worse than you could ever imagine," I added as I shook my head.
Some hours later I slipped into my sister's room. I was naked. I bent down and picked her naked form from the bed and then, with her cradled in my arms, started towards the door. "And don't think you can pretend you're asleep this time Izzy," I warned as I started up the stairs to my room.
"You're sleeping with me from now on, understand?"
It was our first night alone together. The first of what we both knew would be thousands. We took our time. Explored every inch of each others body.
Then fucked hard!
"Charlie, you shouldn't... Maria might see," she started to admonish when I wrapped my arms around her from behind and bent and kissed her.
I carried her to her bedroom. Made love to her.
"I'll never leave him... I love him," mom whispered as we lay panting side by side later.
And, I think Charlie said to his Dad, "They're animals, Dad." Mmmmmm. Fucking every female in the family is not animalistic? Well, it makes for a good story line, an erotic tale, and it begs for more. I'm waiting for Mom's and Sophia's daughters to grow to 18 so Dad Charlie or is it Grand Dad Charlie can impregnate more of the family. Let's see he'd be about 37. And then if those girls had more girls that grew to 18, Charlie at about 56 could father even more. The real story would see Charlie at age 75 fathering one more set of girls. Maybe somewhere along the line there would be another Charlie birthed so that the fantasy could continue forevermore. Soon they would have enough members that they could start their own commune, Charlies' Nude Group, and they could always invite Graham back for that one special Nude Day each year. Great story Jim. Hope these characters will be back!
Best
Probably the best incest story. Tying the nudist colony with the incest was a brilliant idea. The ending was a little slow, but the total product was excellent!
Absolutely the best incest story.
Thanks for a great effort, I had a stroke while reading,
then another and another, made a mess. Hehehehehehe.
great story
great story hope to see more thanks
Great read
Really enjoyed the series. Would love to read more.
A masterpiece
Outrageous and hilarious and loving and so enjoyable
You Are A Masterful Writer
I totally agree with anonymous below me however something was left out. So I add this ---- but so, so, so incomplete!
Develish...!
i wasn't really in the mood this moment for anything literotica....
but ur story had me going! my wife couldn't understand what's up with my sudder vigor!
thanks for the submission!
You're such a rascal scouries !!!
Quick witted humour - hilarious situations - all conspire to produce a comical,well written and entertaining story.
Another scouries score !!
Thank you - please keep writing and posting on Literotica.
WHOA!
YOU THE MAN I SPENT MY WHOLE VACATION OVER DOSING ON YOUR LITERARY WORKS OF PURE ART DAMN KEEP IT UP AND CONTINUE THIS STORY
You son of a bitch. Loved the story.
I got abs from laughing so hard while reading this story.
My heart melt from the love radiating from the family.
My dick hurts so good from busting one huge load of juicy thick semen.
Wonderful story. Please continue writing. You are a talented author and will always get my vote.
Now for the partial negative comment. Even though I really don't like unfaithful spouses being it the wife or husband, you made it fit quite since I didn't give a shit for Graham by the end of the story.
THANK YOU
Wonderful finish - is there going to be an epilogue?
totally great
what a great story!!!!!!!! One of the best i have ever read.... What a lucky family nice ending very well done
I tried to "favorite" you and this story but found out that I already had both in favorites.
I REALLY liked this story, would have appreciated longer and more explicit sex scenes but loved what you gave. Thank you for writing.
=)
There got to be a part 3 in you head some where. lol
and the sex seens were to short especially when hes with hes mother and both of his sisters we need more details. =(
Just as good as the first chapter!
You definitely wrote another one for my favorite list here.
brilliant
it was a very good story . only, i'm kind of a one-woman kind of guy so i thought it would had been best for charlie and isabel to be exclusive by the end...
The best!
The Best I've read yet!!! 10 out of 5 Starssssssssss!!!
AWSOMELY writen and told.
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