All Comments on 'Charlie's Naked Proposal Ch. 02'

nice second chapter and i loved it. keep up the good work.

There's more entertaining fiction there than this.

ANOTHER GREAT STORY. Got to have More

That had more incest in it than the Bible. Much more sensual descriptions, too. God, you're good. Thank you Lord this author doesn't adhere to what appears to be the prevailing literary philosophy on this site of mass-producing multi-chapter stories with little or no sex. NO SEX ON A PORN SITE? Heaven forbid! This story is all familial SEX, SEX, SEX! Oh, it's funny too. The dialog is hilarious. I was laughing all the way.

this is so hot.more chapters please!

ER I MEAN STARS

Got me off good.Thats what Im here for

A very well written story and the sex was good toooooo..

Got a raging thirst for mother's milk but no one in the family lactating. Guess I gotta knock somebody up. Been avoiding that up to now but since Dad got a vasectomy it's up to me. Mom and both sisters are ready candidates and to be sure I'm gonna plant my seed in all three--several times.

loved the 2nd chapter as much as the first, but hey.. Penn is a much better school than boring old Yale and harder to get into these days!! yeah yeah.. I am biased ;)

This has got to be your best one; yet, there is room to grow. The depth, you use, is greater than any I've seen for a long time; but you can go deeper yet. It would be like straining the cervix instead of just hitting the G-spot.

Although some may think this is enough, you can go into more detail during the encounter; sort of like building to a climax. Share EACH lovers emotions AND feelings with the readers. Let them feel what it is like to go beyond their mental limitations; to feel it themselves. Each thrust going deeper than the previous; making each reader feel it going deeper; making them ache for release, until they can contain it no more; finally exploding their minds into a mental orgasm of their own; just as the lovers drench each other into oblivion; washing each other with their own enjaculation. 'The Best is Yet to Cum'. jim

Seemed more rushed than the first chapter. For the contest you had more substance. Humor was void in this chapter. Chapter one I thought about for weeks. This one wasn't bad but forgettable.

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That was a great story,....Dear Jim please do not stop. I am waiting for the next episodes.

Jim: You are one great author. I enjoy your sense of humor especially. I have been reading stories on Literotica for some 2 years now and you have shown more potential than anyone I have read before. Keep it up, Mike.

This is the first time I ever left a comment. This was so HOT! Can we make a continuation? Perhaps they convince pops like they did the husband except he tried it? Make a pretty hot double drillin orgy ;) We wanna see Izzy get knocked up too. Please dont stop

What I want to know is will there be a 3rd installment? One where Izzy gets pregnant? Does dad join in on the milking?

I would love another chapter.

These two episodes were the best of anything that I've read so far. I even made myself wait for two days in between to increase the thrill of anticipation!

In another brilliant story from this author we find young Charlie, a very intelligent guy, with an overload in his young potent balls that has to be released, involved with his very closest female family! There's his older sister, his very own mother, and his saucy kid sister, all of whom Charlie has fuck plans for! All the family females know about Charlie's outsized dick and heavy balls, and are deeply stirred! The cocky bastard makes sure to fuck babies up the cunts of all three--his older sister before her wedding, his own mother before she gets together with her new wimp husband, and his cute kid sister--all of them now carrying Charlie's babies! Charlie is one of the proud heroes of all sister-humping and motherfucking annals! There should be statues of him with his big stiff triumphant dick and heavy hanging balls, and his sisters and mothers with their fat pregnant bellies all over the place! This young man is an icon for bold family fuckers everywhere!

I loved this story, both chapters, and the fact that you plan to add dad into the next one is awesome. These are the first stories i have read of yours and I must admit i will be looking for more of your work in the days to CUM. Thank you for an inspirational story to help me through a very HARD moment in time.

...your genius continues to amaze me. I almost passed over this tale, until I saw Scouries at the mast head. And it was more than worth it. As a once-published author to be, I stand in awe at your ability to word smith such tales. Please don't retire anytime soon! Thanks, again! Jim

wow what a story full of love. one of the best stories i read.

....i felt like i was there....such a talent you are.....

This was one of the best. I hope you will write a Chapter three or more.

Thanks for a great story.

What happened to Charlie and Izzy? Did they finally have moments together outside of the bedroom without others joining in or being around? If he loved her so much, why was she not his primary interest? It seems as if he loved all the women in his family equally although, the story did try to make it seem as if he loved Izzy more. I want to know what happens next. Please continue the story.

An all around top of the line story.It has it all, really erotic sex, funny , drama and lots of love. The boy is going to have a flock of kids before he reaches 30 years old, with three women to keep pregnant. Mom is the only one that the clock is starting to run down, so he will have to work hard to keep her knocked up. From 41 to 18 that's a hell of a selection of pussy to pick from. Great story Thanks.......Rich

... and crazy !!! The family that loves together stays together !!

R

that moves at a tantalizing pace so much so you have to keep on reading it to find out what happens next. Really enjoyed it despite the fact he cuckolds his own father - he is going to worn to a frazzle having to keep up with three highly sexed women popping babies out one after the other. Leaves you fantasizing about the future and wondering if and when his dad will get involved - well done - you are one of the handful of writers on here who can tell a darn good story without everyone having to fuck from beginning to end.

Naughty very naughty but what a read it had me doing things to myself that a respactable married woman shouldn't do that's for sure, wonderful

yet another Great story from you. your my fav auther here ty.

a story that has a start and end.with a good deal of sex added,but how did dad get to be so dumb

this site or elsewhere, because there was no comment on either story from me, and I'm trying to leave a mark, so I don't repeat reads. Regardless, I DID repeat this one and was glad I did. I guess it is a fantasy of many males to covet a female and be able to take her. Dreams for some do come true. There were a few odd statements. For example:

"They're animals dad ... it was ... just horrible," I finally admitted.

"Worse than you could ever imagine," I added as I shook my head.

Some hours later I slipped into my sister's room. I was naked. I bent down and picked her naked form from the bed and then, with her cradled in my arms, started towards the door. "And don't think you can pretend you're asleep this time Izzy," I warned as I started up the stairs to my room.

"You're sleeping with me from now on, understand?"

It was our first night alone together. The first of what we both knew would be thousands. We took our time. Explored every inch of each others body.

Then fucked hard!

"Charlie, you shouldn't... Maria might see," she started to admonish when I wrapped my arms around her from behind and bent and kissed her.

I carried her to her bedroom. Made love to her.

"I'll never leave him... I love him," mom whispered as we lay panting side by side later.

And, I think Charlie said to his Dad, "They're animals, Dad." Mmmmmm. Fucking every female in the family is not animalistic? Well, it makes for a good story line, an erotic tale, and it begs for more. I'm waiting for Mom's and Sophia's daughters to grow to 18 so Dad Charlie or is it Grand Dad Charlie can impregnate more of the family. Let's see he'd be about 37. And then if those girls had more girls that grew to 18, Charlie at about 56 could father even more. The real story would see Charlie at age 75 fathering one more set of girls. Maybe somewhere along the line there would be another Charlie birthed so that the fantasy could continue forevermore. Soon they would have enough members that they could start their own commune, Charlies' Nude Group, and they could always invite Graham back for that one special Nude Day each year. Great story Jim. Hope these characters will be back!

Probably the best incest story. Tying the nudist colony with the incest was a brilliant idea. The ending was a little slow, but the total product was excellent!

Thanks for a great effort, I had a stroke while reading,

then another and another, made a mess. Hehehehehehe.

great story hope to see more thanks

Really enjoyed the series. Would love to read more.

Outrageous and hilarious and loving and so enjoyable

I totally agree with anonymous below me however something was left out. So I add this ---- but so, so, so incomplete!

i wasn't really in the mood this moment for anything literotica....

but ur story had me going! my wife couldn't understand what's up with my sudder vigor!

thanks for the submission!

Quick witted humour - hilarious situations - all conspire to produce a comical,well written and entertaining story.

Another scouries score !!

Thank you - please keep writing and posting on Literotica.

YOU THE MAN I SPENT MY WHOLE VACATION OVER DOSING ON YOUR LITERARY WORKS OF PURE ART DAMN KEEP IT UP AND CONTINUE THIS STORY

I got abs from laughing so hard while reading this story.

My heart melt from the love radiating from the family.

My dick hurts so good from busting one huge load of juicy thick semen.

Wonderful story. Please continue writing. You are a talented author and will always get my vote.

Now for the partial negative comment. Even though I really don't like unfaithful spouses being it the wife or husband, you made it fit quite since I didn't give a shit for Graham by the end of the story.

Wonderful finish - is there going to be an epilogue?

what a great story!!!!!!!! One of the best i have ever read.... What a lucky family nice ending very well done

I REALLY liked this story, would have appreciated longer and more explicit sex scenes but loved what you gave. Thank you for writing.

There got to be a part 3 in you head some where. lol

and the sex seens were to short especially when hes with hes mother and both of his sisters we need more details. =(

You definitely wrote another one for my favorite list here.

it was a very good story . only, i'm kind of a one-woman kind of guy so i thought it would had been best for charlie and isabel to be exclusive by the end...

The best!

AWSOMELY writen and told.

Just a wonderful story with hot sex, a little romance and strong scenarios. Now if there were only a third chapter, then it would be perfect. Hands down one of my favorites on this site, and one of your absolute best.

I don't know if I commented on this great story the first three times I read it. It ranks very high on your list of great stories. Sex, humor, all that good stuff. If you ever write another chapter make sure that Dad gets something more than milk. Thank you for writing.

excellent story great subject, but needs more needs a sequel like 1 or 3 more or more !!!!!

it was hot and sexy and defintely needs to continue

Thanks for this excellent story!

but Sophie was a cheating fuck slut whore to treat her husband like that....probably why he decided to leave the nest....mother is also a cheating fuck slut whore to her husband and getting pregnant to her son....shows she has absolutely no respect for her husband......the son is just a cock happy bastard...pity no one found out about the fire and put his ass in jail.....now he has all the women to fuck and keep happy...it will never last...they will soon be looking for more cocks to please them...on the one hand a good story and funny in places but on the other...two cheating sluts who cuckolded their husbands....not a nice thing to do

I like most others do not agree with anonamous. Was an excellent story just needs follow up.keep up the good work.

good descriptions of the Nude Day meetings -- a sequel would be splendid, of course pp John

Chapter three is begging to be told, and it should bring Jenny into the family.

Among the many writers here who can't keep verb tense straight, and wouldn't know a comma if it bit them in the ass, your contributions are invariably well written and supremely entertaining.

And to your few detractors who feel obliged to condemn women who have sex outside of their marriages as "cheating fuck slut whores," my advice is, "Lighten up, Francis. It's a stroke story."

I suspect they themselves had partners who cheated on them. What these bitter cucks fail to understand is that, more often than not, infidelity is the RESULT of marital problems - not the CAUSE of them.

I only don't like the ending.You basically changed Charlie into an asshole and a hypocrite. He calls Graham's family animals and the experience horrible while fucking his own 2 sisters and his mother. And why would Graham have problems with incest? He grew up with it.

I don't mind that you wanted an ending with Charlie fucking his mother and sisters its just the way you got to it that bothers me.

Ok, so I only got to the part where mom fucked him when I came. Normally it's the build up and seduction that do it for me...and this story scored high with that! Found the recurring camera references kinda juvenile and not necessary. ..but hey, that's just me. Found the impregnating a but overboard too, but the whole request to nurse and subsequent nursing discussion way hot. In the end, it was a sexy, fun, fantasy that I'm glad you shared.

He didn't want his child raised in the commune. He didn't tell his father what happened @ the wedding so he sure couldn't tell him that his oldest daughters child was his. So he did the next best thing. He fed his father's Phobia. It worked for me Good Job as usual Keep on Keeping On!

You know this needs more chapters you had some excellent stories that you cut a little short like Emily's Christmas Milk.I sent him a message folks wondering if he is still among the living .I am getting a little old and infirm myself so I wonder.

Wellwritten as usual, but the nudist part was unpleasant and not believable. The entire story was forced and unnatural. Poor Graham. He didn't stand a chance. Still, he and his family don't seem too great.

All together, a very mixed piece of work.

Charlie's no hypocrit. He knew exactly what he was doing when he spoke of how terrible it was. Just like makeing love with Sophie, he was planting seeds. He needed for his father to want Sophie back home more than he disaproved of his son in law. Graham's attitude is easily understood. Its one thing to watch other people shareing your relatives, one thing to have sex even with them. But to watch your wife doing it with someone else and knowing what he, himself was thinking when he was doing it - well thats another thing. Charlie is an admirable character. Family before everything else. He didn't try to replace or belittle his father, even though he had secretly replaced him in his mother's arms. Never let his father know what he and his sisters were doing. He let his dad believe what he needed to believe and simply love his family. Maybe Dad will try Mother's milk and maybe not. Scouries left it up to the reader to decide.

I love this story it should have a sequel you have lots of great works

Great story needs sequel

This WAS a great story. Up all the way till the end, but then you suggested the idea of a 5 way with Dad. I kind of lost my building cum at that point. I was about to go back and re-read some 'inspirational passages' until I came to that. I don't think more chapters are needed. The bimbos at the commune are forgotten, the Poole's will welcome Graham home - but he'll probably be less enthusiastic about commune life and 'free love' after watching his wife getting boned by her brother. Dad is interested in being a great lawyer and in being a Dad again, but probably not very much into sex anytime soon. Charlie and Isabel have transformed their future. Mom will happily be Mom to Charlie's daughter and so will Sophie. So I think their stories are told and wrapped up pretty well. Just don't write Dad into a menage a troi's. He isn't suited for it. And who knows, as bossy as Izzy is she might just become 'Mistress Isabel'.

Looking for the next installment!

Great story! Loved the humor, the characters and their obvious love for one another. More please

I have told you before, Jim. You are in my top five authors here on Literotica. Thank you again for all your stories and writings. I believe that this is my favorite of all your stories. His Mom is a jewel.

I love this story first time I came across your work I passed over this set of stories but then after reading just about all of them I decided to read this and it turned out to be my favorite one of your works

Talk about leaving things wide open for additional sequences, please do not stop now. Will look for more chapters in this well written and fun to read story.

Thanks for your efforts!

Theys a few stories I got to read ever time I see em. this is won. Izzy come out to be a firer kracker in bed didn't she. Mommy and daddy both got there baby they been wanton. Daddy learnt that even a big time lauwyer don't need to no ever thing. Sone stuff better not heard. if you hear sometn tat you wish you didn't it is real hard to un hear it. sophie got her brothers baby and her freedom from Graham after get to sew her wild oats for awhile at the house of the rising sun. Charlei is getting babies. First daughters an probably later sons to do them when theys grown up. Ever bodies happy. Graham showed that even folks with opened up minds can ony go so far.

it was a very good read, in fact one of the best. kept ones interest thru the entire story

I think I have read them all and I read this one (with pleasure) every time I come across it. I notice that you have not written for us in about five years, I hope that you are in good health and are just not writing for other reasons. You public appreciates you and your writing. Lamar

Great story, great plot, great characters.

And I loved the humour and sarcasm you included, makes such a difference to a story does a good slice of humour.

Well worth more than 5 Stars !

PLZ Don't Add the Dad & ruin it.

Felt like i was there, your writting entranced me, just loved it.

Thankyou

great story would love to read part 3 to see what they get up too and please don't add dad to them just Charlie and his sisters and mum and would love to see Charlie and his sisters married for real

The best story of read ever! The details were amazing, the humor and sarcasm was so much fun. And of course super sexy

Keep it in the family.

I want more of this one 😍😍😍😍😍

Now when did Izzy get pregnant and did Sophie become with child again?

Charlie's Naked Proposal Ch. 03

Dad got caught and he leaves. Polygamy marriage happens in private. Three wives and a husband (Charlie) became Alpha and had many kids.

You did a great job on this series.

Another great story well written.

I really want to meet these women!!!

You get my vote but I hope you got many many more What a corker!!!

More, more!!

5 stars again. Charlie's a lucky man even though he has shed quickly

Nooooooooooooo good

A 20 star story if there ever was one!

Bill S.

Wonderfully written. A few of the other comments give great inspiration for another chapter or two. I hope you continue with this story.

Eine wunderbare, heiße Geschichte. Einfach super, sehr anregend, total erregend, die Steifheit war einfach unglaublich. Hart, steif und total dick, pralle Eier schossen die heiße Sahne aus der Pissrohre meines Scbwanzes

I loved the story the best ever5 star

Oh come on. We need another baby. Izzy's gotta have one. Especially since she said keep"him". Weird twist for dad to bring up Izzy and Charlie to be together.

Wow wow wosie. Another amazing story. Love how they are all different and original. This one is sexual as hell AND funny. Life is good for Charlie.

Learn your Geography... Tennessee and West VA do not even come close to torching..... if you had ever been to that part of the country or even looks at a map you would know it.... still a great story. Love the humor. FALCON