All Comments on 'Maid Wife Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
????????????????????????

just doesn't make sense at the moment

lancewmlancewmover 15 years ago
More character development needed - still hot

The story would make much more sense with character development. Still enjoyed it much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Unfinished

I like it but feel like you stopped in the middle of the story. With the wife having her best orgasm and hubby going to be gone for who knows how long, how can Jim resist enjoying several dinners, etc.??

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 15 years ago
What is Angus really up to?

A bit of a mystery why he just up and quit working, and leaving without his wife.

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