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MORE!!!!
i love this story!!! im dying to see how it ends!!!
Amazing
I was so happy when i found this posted, seeing as it was about 12 01 am when i went looking, praying it was here! Very well done, Cannot wait for the final chapter. I hope you have other stories planned, because i really enjoy your writing.
Oh my f#%*ing god!
Totally loved it but wished it was longer. Cant wait to read what happens next. Hope we dont have to wait to long for it!!
WOW
My dear lady you are magnificent! This is an amazing chapter! I love it and can't wait for more!
hott!!
Wow girl, you've done it again! Congrats on a wonderful story. You should be proud of your ability to make such great characters come to life!
yay!
I'm glad I decided to check for an update tonight...I had kind of figured it wouldn't be up until later in the week. I'm REALLY looking forward to the ending...only I really don't want it to end! *sigh* :)
*happy sigh*
Can't wait to read the last chapter when Angel and Cael are finally back together, like they belong, but sad to see it ending. Amazing story from very beginning...you took us one wild, romantic, exciting, and very satisfying ride. Thank you. :]
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
i might have already said this, BUT IT REALLY DOES HURT THE MOST WHEN YOURE SO CLOSE. gah alexander and angel time.
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
I am so glad I checked to see if you had written another chapter. This is awesome I can not wait to see what happens next with Angel.
yes
wow i just love cant wait for the next one please more
Beyond amazing
I am so happy to read this chapter!!!
NOO. You cant just write one more chapter. Maybe 2 more chapters....but 2 more LONG chapters hahah :)
I dont want this story to end. I loved these two characters from day one. Its just so hard to let them go.......
Love it!
Please more! Cant wait for the next chapter! Thanks!!
Wonderful!!
Seeing how you've already received 10 100% ratings within an hour of the story posting, my compliments of your writing abilities are redundant, but still... WOW! You're an excellent writer & I'm in awe of your writing skills. By the 17th chapter most author would have ran out of good ideas & began to focus more on sex instead of plot. Though that's not necessarily bad, I still marvel at your ability to make the plot SO exciting this late in the story.
I hate the thought that the adventures will end soon for Cael & Anna, but I know you will just gift us with another great series. Perhaps one involving Cael's friends? Whatever you decide, I'm sure it'll be great, and I can't wait!! Thank you for sharing your talents!
Can't say it enough, this is a great story
Anna is going to drive Alexander insane with worry. After all of this, he is not going to let her be out of his sight or away from his side for a very long time. I can't even imagine what he's going to do to Paola if he's even still alive. It's always a sad thing to see a great story come to an end, but please make the last chapter as long as possible to prolong it. Thanx for this story.
Bloody Brilliant !
Bravo! Bravo! Once again what an amazing ride you've taken us on. Surely you can't mean to end this so quickly, but if so, could this be a much longer chapter this time round? Its not very often you come across such gems like the stories you write. How about a continuation of this with say Mara hooking up with Caels second in command perhaps??? Hmmm just a thought aye.
Mauri Ora!
*Holds breath*
OK I think I'm gonna pass out waiting for the next chapter....but this one was AMAZING! Grats darlin on another great one
Yay!
So glad to read your new chapter. Please hurry with the next one! Could see the scene with your descriptions. Please keep writing more about Anna and Cael.
Incomparable to Anything Else
Thank you Eli for another wonderful chapter. I'm dizzy from it and will have to read it again just to make sure that I didn't miss anything. Loved it! Waiting for more and I know it's going to be beyond good.
Exceptional
I have been waiting for this since your last chapter. And finally it's here...I loved the plot and would love to see how the climax plays into your next wonderful piece of literature. I do not want to see this come to an end so soon. If so then perhaps a spin off with some of the same characters in a following series. WELL DONE AND BRAVO!!!
Brilliant!>......
....Dont want it to end!!! LOL Loving this story, so well thought out and written!! Lookforwards to more of your work!
Wow!
So much happened in this chapter, it was great! I'm excited for the next but sad it's the end. You're an excellent writer and I'm looking forward to the conclusion and any new stories you post.
Yay!!!
It's up. I've been checking everyday. Oh no!! One more chapter? How about two more very long chapters? Pretty pleeeeaaase.... I don't want the story to end. I'm in love with Cael and Anna. Mara and Kieran? Maybe it's just me but I really don't see them together. Anyways, I'm looking forward to more of your writing, even if they're not spin-offs from this story. Girl, you're really good.
As many as you want!
Oh yes please one or two or more pleeeaaassssseeee. A great read this and you've kept the integity of the plot all the way through too. But please when you can finsh this tale with a bang not a whmper.
oh my fucking GOD!!!!
I love your work..Can not wait for the next one!!!!
you are such a tease!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
but omg this was awesome!! was there ever sex in this story??? lmao im so kidding we want sex!! ok next chapter and if its the end, it better be long or we will whine at you for weeks and weeks
ok back to read it again ~~thank you hun it was amazing!
sass
OMG
OMG OMG
I LOVE THIS STORY
ITS SO FUCKING AWESOME (>v
Just freakin WOW
I am so glad i tripped over your stories. Holy cow are they great! Great action Great plot Great sex . Damn! Keep it going. You have developed some pretty serious characters and have breathed a long life into them.
I just knew today would be the day for a new
chapter, thank god for female intuition. I love it! But aren't you brilliant at dragging it out dammit? Every chapter I think this is the one where they will be reunited, lol I guess if there is just one left then that will have to be the one :) Are we getting a story for Kieran? Hehe I know, I know, but I can't help it, he's all snarly and sexy :P
Please Continue
I/we love the continuation of the Cael and Anna saga. We ask you to consider writing about them still in this series or start another "Book" about them. Let me stress how much we look forward to your story.
yay
I am glad you finally added another chapter and am seriosly looking forward to the ending.. make it good and long..please.... i do love this story and they really deserve their happy ending..
Thank God!
I was coming here nearly daily to check on new releases! I do think it's a gd idea to finish this part here and do a new one... maybe two years later or something so that it won't be too long and thus appear commercialised. Or you could start on Kieran with another girl (maybe Mara??) and have Cael and Anna make frequent appearances. But I bow to your creativity and experience as a writer to know what is best. I find that it is usually the best writer which sticks to their own plot, rather than being led by too many 'writers'. Good job and thanks in advance for the next chapter! You'll remain my fav author and I hope you won't stop at this :)
Please don't end it yet!!
I am hooked and can't seem to get enough. If there has to be only one more chapter, please make it a long and detailed one.
I hope you decide to branch out with the characters; Kieran and Mara would make a very interesting couple.
Hooked!
Puleeese don't let us wait too long. I'm simply addicted to this story. Have mercy and hurry with the next chapter!
Fantastic !
oh please please, finish it, make it good and long, I can't wait to read it !!!!
But..
But I don't want it to end..
The story is amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Riveting!
Your story telling has reached a new level, and you leave me amazed. Falling is so real, so thoroughly thought out, and paced to always leave the reader dying for more when the chapter ends. Please continue, please get this published so that I may hold it in my hands and read it over and over....
AHHHHH!!!!!!
Oh my gosh......the suspense is killing me!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the reunion between cael and angel....how about you lock yourself in a room for the next couple of days and write the next chapter :)
MARVELOUS
IT WAS SIMPLY WONDERFUL IM SO GLAD EVERYTHING SEEMS TO BE WORKING OUT. CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER?
uggghh!
How about you take a mini-vacation from the real world and give us a great reunion chapter. Maybe even another series! Love your writing! MaryJen614
Woohoo!!
Awesome awesome awesome! Please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter!
Fantastic!!!
I screamed with joy when I saw that 17 was posted! And Hooray!!! Anna remembers! I hope everything will turn out swimmingly from now on but I never know if your going to put in another plot twist to torture us or not!
Great job again!
I love this story!
Great chapter! I can't wait till the next one!
HURRY
Don't make us wait long !!! Huuuury with the next chapter :)
this is a great story, I hope you will continue the plot line with another story based on some of these characters... I know i'm rooting for a couple of key characters lol
Damn the suspense!
I want to know what happened! Great chapter!
WOW!!
I just about fell out of my set with joy when I seen that chapter 17 was up and it was GRAET!! I really can't what for more so please hurry and depending on the next chapter I hope its not the end I really love this story. Thank you ! Thank you!
I CAN'T WAIT!
Please don't end this story. I won't have anything to look forward too. I love this story! I love Cael!
ahh booo
I hate hearing that there's only going to be one more chapter. Hopefully you won't make us wait another 10 days ;).
One more chapter!?
Hey Elianna,
I never thought I'd be so relieved to hear you say 'one more chapter' to this fantastic story but I really am going to be relieved - it's been such torture, sitting on the edge of my seat and waiting for the next instalment. I'm going to love the last one too - I know it already!
Thanks for being such a wonderful writer and sharing with us your work!
Soon?!
Okay - one more chapter is fine - as long it is soon. Or two. I love this story, but can't wait to read the next chapter - I'm holding my breath and may turn blue for lack of air!
ONE MORE CHAPTER!!!
I love this series. PLEASE deliver the next chapter soon. I need her to get back together with Alexander. And,you can't just end it there. You have to find someone for Kieran, Mara, and Jay. They all have to have some kind of conclusion. But, whatever you do, don't keep me waiting too long. PLEASE!!!
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