All Comments on 'Twins Saved by Nudity Ch. 11'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
where has this gone?

This has meandered down a dark alley and lost all sense of direction. Was that meant to be erotic at the end? Rough boy nearly rapes her and then they all go home...sorry but you lost the plot and I lost it too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I really feel for these creeps who

can't get laid without using force

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

How were they saved by nudity?!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

It is good that people can take erotic fiction and make it a real story by adding tension, as much as I feel horrible reading it, it is no different than Bambi's mother getting shot. It is horrible, but it makes for you feel for the people in the story and emphasis with them. It is much, much better than porn that glamorizes abuse.

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