All Comments on 'Mrs. Halston's Will'

I think you better stick with writing essays for your high school classes. Above 18? I think not. Regards, Umberto.

If you can't take the heat stay out of the kitchen--Shit head

I like the subject matter, but you need to add more tension. The other authors you listed as well as Encarta are all able to draw it out, which makes it more exciting.

I think your stories would be improved if the femme fatales were a little more subtle (with just as evil designs), and the male resisted much more.

Keep trying!

Why such a short episode about Brenda ?

She could have helped Mrs.Halston with fucking Trent, by holding him down, or sitting on him, or fondling him beforehand in class.... etc

Please do continue writing !

i hated it. horribly written and obviously unthought of plot.

Continue writing please.

doidnt we all have a teacher that we would have gave into and dumped the girl we were with?

i hope that you will write more,maybe continue some of the stories that you already have started.

Hey we can't introduce sluts like brenda and leave them empty.

This was nice and short, and had the desired effect!

I was just about to cum & I read the last line,"...even the janitor." And i just laughed uncontrollably.

or anywhere else.

I enjoyed this!