All Comments on 'The Prize Ch. 08'

I'm so glad that you submitted an update. You're stories are some of my favorites.

ur back ur back im soo happy.you have been missed and i carnt wait for the updates from your stories. carnt wait but a job well done!!

but I really wish you would update more often. I had to go back to chapter 5 to pick the story up again, a bit frustrating, but still excellent work. Now I only hope you will add to birthday present fit for a prince. It is one of the best pieces of nonconsensual writing I've read on lit. Thank you.

Glad your back and this was an iteresting piece of work you wrote. loved it totally. please continue with your other stories aswel please i cannot wait. soo glad your back i really thought there where going to be unfinshed it would have been wasted talent!

I am so glad you updated again! It was a great installment and I can't wait for more!

omg... i fell in love with teel and rogue. you need to get them to admit their love for each other...

i want to know more about rogue's mother, and how it will all play out.

(fingers crossed) happy ending please. i think i would cry if they went through all this and not have one.

well done so far ... but i personally feel that it's impossible to love someone to whom u are a slave.... i hope Teel will be given a choice between freedom and Rouge.... and that she really wants to stay; or at least return.

So glad you've picked up this story again, it was well worth the wait!

hey! whens the next part coming out??

I've been dying to see you finish this one and would LOVE that much needed completion to a great story to come soon.

Such a great story by the way.

i was so hoping u'd update this!

I'm just about to read chapter 8. I know it'll be as hot as the rest.

I loved the first 6 chapters. By 7th the story changed to her basicly having amnesia until the very last sentence of the 8th chapter she remembers. It just seems unfinished. But maybe its just how you write.

This story is fantastic. I never expected to find actual literature among the sex stories on an erotica website!

You have managed to keep the tone of the story highly sexual throughout while still creating engaging characters and a compelling plotline.

Long erotica stories often become repetitive or begin to seem pointless, but this one seems tightly structured and leaves the reader eager to discover what will happen next.

Speaking of which... what happens next? I fully agree with the earlier comment that a happy ending is in order! ^^

Thanks for the great read!

HM...that doesnt seem finish and the last time you posted was last year..when are you gonna post another chapter...please be soon...it so .........O.o

I'm dying for another chapter!!!

plz finish this story

Please please pleas finish the story I love the Black Rogue.

I love the story. So HOT!!!! Please... please... pleas...finish the Black Rogue story

more please

well.....? what happens next??????

finish this story please!

This is a wonderfully well written story and I just don't think it's at its end yet, please finish it! It's one of my very favourites :)

PLEASE finish it!!!

I NEED TO KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN!!

Can you tell me when are you going to post more??

I WANT MORE!!!

It's KILLING ME T_T

Please finish, I've been hanging on the edge of my seat!

Please, for Pete's sake, finish this story!!!!

oh lord, please update soon!!!! (T.T)

I love this story, and would LOVE to see you finish it. However, if you have no intention of finishing it in the forseeable future, please just let us know!

Thank you!

OMG! This one of my favorite story! PLEASE CONTINUE IT! PLEASEEEEEEEEEEE

Hi. I am always incredibly flattered when I am asked to finish something. It means that people are reading and they are interested. And nothing motivates me more than knowing that. I know it has been a LONG time since there was any update on The Prize and for that I apologize. I have a bad habit of starting a story with this really great idea, and no idea of how it's going to end (aside from happily ever after) or how I'm going to get there. So I have been repeating the vicious cycle of coming up with an idea and shooting it down for where I want to go with this. Please know that this story, and you, are never far from my mind, but I care too much about you to rush through another chapter (which I think will be the final chapter) without having a clear course to travel and feeling positive about the outcome. I truly am working hard to get this finalized as soon as possible, and I appreciate your continued patience.

Absolutely love this story. Well done! :)

Please?

i love this story and i also love the one birthday gifts for a price or something like that, i don't really remeber the title, but you let them BOTH unfinshed and here i am, dying to read the end!!!!!!!!!!!!!! finish please!!

AMAZING work!!!!! you did a fantastic job.

Really awesome story! Would love it if you could finish it sometime. Honestly one of the best i've ever read, here or anywhere, and i'd love to see it completed so i could read the entire thing over and over and over!! 5 stars all the way through!

PLZ UPDATE SOON

Pls end story

I LOVE THE STORY SO FAR AND LOVE TWIST THAT YOU HAVE SO FAR BUT LEAVING US ON THIS HUGE CLIFF HANGER IS TO MUCH I BEGG YOU PLEASE FINSIH THE STORY FOR ALL OF US WANTING PEOPLE.

I'm sure you are sick of reading this, but PLEASE finish this story. It is so beautiful!

Please!!! It's SOOOO good!! We need if finished! We're begging!

you've got to finish it

What is going to happen now? Please finish!

This is my favorite story and I want, no need, you to either a.) Continue the story or b.) Put an ending!!!! PLEASE!! :<

Would you please finish this story to completion? However, if you plan Teel to end up submissive, then you better don't ;).

It's bad that I've been waiting for you go finish this story for so long, and kind of sad. It's time for me to just let go, lol. Your stories were actually the first real ones that I found and got into when I started reading on this site. Even though you probably tossed this account and will never see this, I just want to say that I hope you're still writing, even if it isn't on here, and that you are doing well.

More Teel! More Rogue! Dude, take away all the sex and this is STILL a great story. I'd love to hear more about Teel's matriarchal society and more about Rogue's past.

I read this for the first time today. It was fantastic. And it needs two more chapters. Please? I need a happy ending!

Fuck! How's this? Fuck! Must I always disagree with everybody else. I really thought that to be the ending and although somewhat rushed, a brilliant one at that! Well...let's face it...this might just end up being the end. And then I'll be right, for just ONCE in my life, I'll get to WIN. Cough...cough.

Fuck! How's this? Fuck! Must I always disagree with everybody else. I really thought that to be the ending and although somewhat rushed, a brilliant one at that! Well...let's face it...this might just end up being the end. And then I'll be right, for just ONCE in my life, I'll get to WIN. Cough...cough.

This is supremely addictive. Great turn and build up