All Comments on 'Brush Strokes Ch. 01'

This is a good start and a well crafted tale.

Pretty good start, fair writing, nice story line. Some sentences are 'run on', but spelling was good, and this writing is better than most. The plot has great potential, so bring it on!

This hit the spot for me. I'd read this kind of thing all day. I'm moving on to chapter 2 and I'm sure it won't disappoint. Have you ever been to Germany? We love that kind of writing here. You'd do well in the alternative scene. Maybe it should be a movie. It would be a huge hit.