All Comments on 'Jungle Man Ch. 03'

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bad_girl69bad_girl69over 15 years ago
YEAH

great job with another addition to this story :) I just loved this chapter. OMG. Mannie is in BIG ASS TROUBLE..

DAMN! Never piss off a woman like that..

hahahaha. I cant wait to see how he is going to 'try and explain' this :)

Please hurry and continue.. please.

naughtyboy2004naughtyboy2004over 15 years ago
Nice but.....

Nice story but you need to go back to school to update yourself on some facts.

Elefants in Brazil?

Hunting in a zoo is easy, the elefants can't run away or atack you, and you are save bhind a fence.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
"Elefants" are also spelled ELEPHANTS....

is there an extra space available in that school maybe? Unless you're talking of the music band Elefants?

Great story! Just found it and loving it! Can't wait for the next part!

tnme3tnme3over 15 years ago
Fabulous

I'm looking forward to the fit of anger that Clara will be having! And to who this mysterious friend is!

savannuhsavannuhover 15 years ago
Nice!

I can't wait to hear his explanation! Keep them coming!

Kara_LangoraKara_Langoraover 15 years ago
Loved every bit!

Absolutely fantastic! I can not wait for the next installment!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
MORE!!

gimme more gimme more!!

your AMAZING!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Need

More, you've gotta write the next installment, I will be waiting.

savannuhsavannuhover 15 years ago
Please please please....

update!!!! i LOVE this story and wanna see where it's going!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Love it!

Love it! Please more and soon! Cant wait to see how clara and mannie fight it out! I hope it works! Cant wait! Thanks!!

onceuponadreamonceuponadreamalmost 13 years ago
Damn

that was one of the best love scenes I've read on this site (and that's saying something.) Excellent job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I thought you said the setting of this story is the Brazilian rainforest? There are no elephants in Brazil.

DaddieskittenDaddieskittenover 7 years ago
Man

Up until the intrusion

Manny and Clara

Ugh oh my god so fucking hot

Gave me the shivers XD

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