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Excellent
I started reading your work a few hours ago and couldn't stop until I had read all of it. I love the way you write, it's so sweet and not loaded with constant drama. Everything seems realistic.
Keep up the great work!
Stupid!
Just a load of utter garbage served up as literature. The subject matter being garbage also.
LOVED IT!!!
Dont listen to that jackass. I love this story line and cant wait to find out what happens next. Dont make us wait to long!
Good stuff!
Ignore that ignorant asshole who didn't like this! It's really good and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!
great
great chapter. i hope he turns out alright. Please don't listen to that bitch who clearly has no idea what they are talking about, your story was great.
Great and Addicting story....
I love this story and am anxiously awaiting its next chapter....please don't leave us hanging too much longer!
Please!!
I check everday for more of this series. The way in wich you write draws us right in. Hope you and the boys are doing good!!
This is a gift!!!
this story is very deep and goes to show no relationship even the most solid is smooth sailing.
once again thank you and thank Anthony and Shawn for this inspiring story.
can't wait to read part 6......you have a gift
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