All Comments on 'In Uniform... In Mom'

I loved every minute of it. Keep up the outstanding work

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I don't usually read or like incest fiction, but this was the most incredibly erotic fiction,incest or not,that I have read on this site. You are extremely talented.

Though your stories are a fairly good read some eye strain occurs. The frequent and over use of ... many times being more than any actual text word and often improperly used. The illogical use of ..., makes no sense at all. Then there is the totally improper grammer of things like "he had had" which grade school level teaches it to be as "he'd had." Just a couple of items to help improve things.

more like vibrator strain.Thanks for wearing out my batteries once again,SandyS

Brought a tear to the eyes in my face and the end of my cock at the same time! Great erotic literature. Pieater

I believe I have read everything you have posted on LIT. I have truly enjoyed everyone of your stories. Each one of them is special in it's own way. Please continue your writing, it has only gotton better with time. THANKS

So I wonder if Mom sings “Soulja boy off in this hoe, watch me crank it watch me roll” or “Soldier oh my little soldier boy, I’ll be true to you.” Nothing like a man in uniform until you get off or get it off, or vice versa. Such a romantic story. Sigh. You should have put this in the Romance category and shut up Darkboy.

This garbage is romantic? What a joke.

this is the best story I read on here.Ur the best writter of incest on here

where your posts are long and boring but not as bad as this.

you sure know how to wrap a reader up into your story

Proper spelling and grammar, that alone made it good. The story line was interesting and stimulating, as it should be.

When next I need a story, I intend look you up.

I loved this and all your stories. I just wish some of the comments posted would relate to your stories and not of grammer mistakes, i was so invoved in the story i did not notce any. I read your stories for their erotic content not to check spelling. Please keep writting as i think it is something you do very well.

Wow, that was a great and wonderful story. Thank you. I hope to hear more. I love incest stories and this a great one. Thanks again.

Loved the fusion of 3 characters into one. Also, the way you fit them into the woman who couldn't have it any other way.

Will the child be a girl? Willing to carry on the legacy her mother will undoughtedly try to encourage? Will Bobby be able to handle both of them when she is old enough?

jim

So happy to see that your writing again. I absolutely LOVED this story! Perfection! I love the way your dirty little mind works and I've missed you!! Keep them coming!

theprncss0905

WOW! You are an amazing writer. You give a little humor with sexuality. I'm not just talking about this story I mean ALL of your stories. It shouldn't be just about sex, a good story has to have a good story line and you know that! I am such a fan! Please continue giving us great stories! Maybe continue this one.

First of yours Ive commented on but not the first ive read. The thing that gets me about your stories, and of your alter-ego sarahhh, is that they begin well but too soon turn into typical male fantasies. Could have gone much better, scouries. Could have tried to accommodate more than the lowest common denominator with your stories. Im not here to tell you how to write, just to tell you what readers admire. And, regardless of all the empty praise, don't you want to appeal to an intelligent audience? you could you know. You and "sarahhh".

I've been a fan ever since I found you on another site. You always tell a fine tale and this was one of your best. Thanks for all your work.

It was gripping all the way through. And I was gripping, too, as my own son was reading this with me, but no need to tell you what I was gripping! I have read almost all of your stories, now, although I have not commented on most of them. But I have always given the maximum marks.

This is a message to all of scouries' adoring fans. I implore you to come to his thread on the Author's Hangout and defend his honor. It will only take a moment to sign out user name, then you can come and defend him IN PERSON and tell all the other authors what an amazing man he is. Perhaps before you do all this, however, you should read through many of the posts there. You may or may not change your mind about defending him and his good name. Signing out a user name doesn't take much and you don't need to reveal anything about yourself that you don't want. Please, take the time to see what kind of a person scouries is, I bet he'd appreciate the support. Here's the link: http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=515029

I have long written my own incest stories of all types, and read countless ones on literotica - yours was an incredible piece of work, combining the erotic and the relationship aspects, and the generational ones as well - fantastic job, I now find myself making sure I read all your work.

It brought tears to the eyes an 84 year old man. I've loved all of your stories, but this was the best. All that I have now are dreams.

.........All of the Marines will love the story...so did i

Awesome read, loved the way it followed each moment. Thanks. Now I can go vote for you!

As a former Leatherneck, who was stationed at Camp Lejeune, on Onslow Beach, in the 70's & 80's I found this story resonanted in both my heads. It being quite believable in the aspects that a young woman lost her Marine husband and turned to her own Marine father for comfort. I was wondering if you contemplated writting anymore of this story. I appreciated your spin on this story.

awesome man ...i really the sory ..its way2 better then i regular boring i saw my mom.s incredubly huge boobs and accidently shoved it up her cunt ....and we atarted fucking like rabbits..nice amn ...i am fan of your s starting today

... the Twilight Zone, kinda eerie, you know ?

R

Not a Marine but retired Military after almost 35 years.

This is one of the best stories I've ever read.

I hope you will do more of them with the military in mind.

should have indicated her getting pregnant.

story before. Was it here? No previous comment from me, and I always leave comments, so perhaps it was elsewhere. No matter. This was simply the best erotic story that I have read. Those who continually knock Jim are way off base, and it appears to me that they (he/she) makes multiple bashing comments. Multiple votes should not be allowed; at least the sign-on should be required and only allowed once per story. This was a great story - Jim is a very capable writer, and I, for one, appreciate his efforts and his diversity within a most erotic topic. Thanks, Jim.

I really appreciated the story line about lonely people and what they did to assuage their loneliness. Good story! Another chapter or two would not hurt my feelings at all. If you do not add to this story line, let me say thanks for what you did write.

my what a lucky chap his mum treated him to her body and helped him get over the hurdles of love

I think another chapter is needed to finalize this story. I do agree, very well written and we need to hear about the end of Becky and where do they move to and get married, how many children do they have and does he end up with a milk fetish. lol very good sir.

Well written scouries !

A highly enjoyable story.

(and that's from a Paratrooper !!)

Thank you Jim.

I would have preferred the sex scenes more explicit and drawn out (not really criticizing) but I loved your story. Mother/son sex is my favorite incest story, I don't know why. No, I never did, only a cousin or two.

thanks again for another well written story, I would like to read more about their continuing relationship

As a retired Marine I celebrate your story and the pride that was passed from each generation. A great love story...from here to eternity.

nice incest story but its very short i wish if son pregnant her mom

That was just so romantic. Isn't it funny how the deeper you get into what society labels 'taboo' you come to realise that the people in those situations are just normal, average citizens...? That they can experience love the same as any 'normal' couple? Just wonderful. Great, evocative story.

Cynthia B.

It was really good until she started having her son/lover/husband to dress in her dead husband's and dead father's uniforms. Then to fuck her, call him by their names, was just a little far out there. Parts of it were really great, all the way up to the uniforms. Lying to him about contraception was not something you do to a lover, no matter who he is. On the up side, how she handled the phone call from Becky was really great, while the way he handled his part was sorta predictable. I think you need to reign yourself in a little. Fucking dead people might need to come under mind control or sci fi, or fantasy.

It's a story like this that I would like to see it go a little further and let everyone know it didn't just stop. Yours are fantastic and I enjoy them.

But once I realized she only seduced her son because she wanted him to roleplay as her father, and husband It became meh :/ Not really my cup of tea, but not bad.

I really don't understand a lot of those comments. I thought that this is one of the hottest stories I've ever read here. I do believe that it was past role-playing, Of course, I have a very active imagination. Thank you so much!

And liked them all. I will have to go down your page again to check for new ones. You have been a favorite author for several years. In my top five, for sure. Thank you again for all you write.

jim this story was great keep writing and looking out for new ones some people don't understand what a uniform can do to a women I know ex forces that's how I met my wife keep up the good work

A uniform is just cloth. It's the person inside. Military and veterans have an aura about them that non military just don't quite seem to have.

I really liked this story. It just felt right. I've not read all of your stories, yet. This is the best by far. It also gives the hint of how much they give, not just the soldier or Marine, but the families. What do you do when they come home in a casket? She's lucky she had a son who was a real man.

Great,guess that's why I give all your stories 5 stars!

I REALLY loved the characters and the interaction between the mom and son!!! I also really liked the way that you included the father and the grandfather into the story.

It was definitely one of my FAVORITE stories on here!!

A FOREVER FAN!!!

Exceptionally well written - descriptive words of famly, family love and family incest. In all combinations of togetherness of incestuous romance and sex. A beautiful love story of mother-son, and make believe of father and grandfather. Incest can be truly loving and exceptional when giving and receiving sex with a close relative.

Sorry, I just don't know what else to say.

I have to agree with the previous 2 comments. This story was fantastic. This has to be one of THE BEST stories I've ever read on literotica. Have to admit it brought tears to my eyes. Thank you so much.

(P.s. I have liked all your stories but,,,,,,,wow)

marvelous fantasy...wistfully loved it...so sad that incest seldom ends well.

Beautifully written

I like your writing style and quality. While I am aroused by mother son incest stories, not so much with this one. It's the taboo aspect that arouses me, I guess. Your story was the opposite of a taboo - the sex came almost like a duty. Also, I do not care for mothers getting pregnant when they fuck their sons. I would have enjoyed the story more if the mother encouraged Becky to fuck her son, and maybe joined in in a three way fuck, initially shocking Becky, but then both enjoying the lesbian cunt licking, and hopefully ass licking, while the son fucks all their holes.

This was a very melancholy story of former loves and a current love also.

Memories often control lots of our lives and loves.

As humans, I feel that we need continuity in our lives and that we look to the past to gauge our current pathsl

I liked the story. The love was palatable.

I'd like to read another like it.

Mom was a highly disturbed and sexually charged woman. This story played it out well. It could use a sequel, tho'.

You will never get more than a 1 💫 allowing the mother to be shared with another family member with me. I hate it when the writer allow anyone other than the son to get the pussy...

I like the plot just fine, but your obvious lack of research kind of killed it for me. It's very easy to find out that Marines don't do recruit training at Camp Lejeune, NC (they do it at Paris Island, SC or San Diego, CA), and recruits most definitely do NOT interact with civilians, dependent or otherwise (only preachers for Sunday church). Would have been simple to have simply changed it to him meeting her at his first unit instead of training.

It's scouries.

What can you expect from one such as him?

Nice y81h3r

Had a nice flow to it. Just nicely written

I truly believe that your story hit the mark right on maybe not in your family or mine but in a lot of homes over the decades because of war ( or policing actions )

The essence of love!! Good story.

A deep family lust and love that transcends generations, beautifully described in this excellent story.

As an ex-serviceman I have seen the destruction that early death can and does reek on both young wives and families through many generations, because of the very nature of their employment service men either marry very young, i.e.in their teens or they wait until they have completed their time. Young service widows tend to return to their families for physical and emotional support, the support offered by the government and defence department is cold and heartless, especially if the widow is occupying a married quarter.

auto story dump and a 1 star

Love the story. AAAAAA++++++

It was a very good story. Please write more on this. On this story. Or just more stories like this one/.

This was one of best love stories I have ever read. Keep writing. Thank you

Now THAT was so erotically different. 5 stars

Another home run! Every paragraph is sensual. Every story so different. You are an artist with words. Loved it.

Great story, first time reading but not my last

Almost Twilight Zone-ish. Good story. 5/5*

Scouries you're a master story teller. I discovered you today by accident and this is already the third story I've read. Full marks for someone who knows the art of storytelling You sometimes take a taboo subject but the way you tell it makes so much sense and is so plausible and possible that we let all our learned values fly out the window for we accept this is fantasy in the mind of a master! 5-Stars!

Loved it loved how mother wanted her son and their sex was awesome and then she had him become his father and grandfather to relive her sex with both, but you should have continued till she became pregnant with his child and if he became a marine!! Gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Slut moms are not a turn on.

I'm a Dutchman near the 70yo, my English language (even translated) isn't so easy for me, but this story showed me and gave me the feelings of real love.

Today (in the internet period) it's difficult to find those feelings in a story, there are a few authors who can write about those warm feelings... and they are even difficult to find as erotic stories. Thanks for writing, I loved it very much!

Eglefino

Mom was 35 and he is grown up with a woman?Don't think so.25 year old son nowadays means 50 to 55 year old mom.