Store Clerk Ch. 01

Like where its going

Great story. Waiting for the next installment

More! More! More!

And so adventure with all the toys and clothing in the store... Great start. Please continue. Thanks!

Like it so far

I like it so far; the concept especially. The increasing arousal and excitement feels rather rushed over to get to something that will happen ... and then it's "to be continued". Then again, that's much what the store clerk is going through as each person walks back out and she has to cool down.

hot hot!

please continue on this, definitely liked it and i'm at the edge of my seat wondering what's next.

If only i could go to your store.

loved it :)