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by Anonymous

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by 08/25/08

Hot!

Nice description of shifting awareness during intimacy.

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by WickedEve08/25/08

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This is a nice piece of erotica. There seems to be no unnecessary words, which is a very good thing. :) You know what I'd like to read? Next time you have an intimate encounter, afterwards of course, write a poem while the images, scents, touches, etc, are still fresh. Describe the scene. That can make for some powerful erotica, if done right.

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by Sapphos Sister06/15/09

Nort a word wasted

I was looking for something erotic without being crass. And I found it. Lovely.

Fx

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