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I look for You

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by Anonymous

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by lindiana08/27/08

terrific

...a wonderful work even though you have breathe spelled wrong...

Other than that, a great job

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by Safe_Bet08/27/08

Well Done

Especially liked how you ended. Nice. Your Master would be so proud of you!

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by WickedEve08/27/08

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breath/breathe you're/your seem to trip writers up often. :) Nice poem; keep writing, shy slave.

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by LeBroz08/27/08

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This poem has been selected for listing in Wednesday's New Poems Review.



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by Anonymous10/16/12

Hope for the future

Well written, and I recognise the sentiment

Mike x

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