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I am unsatisfied
with this chapter for two reasons;
1. too short
2. did not like the outcome; but I guess that just means the tale got to me, HOPEFULLY. I am trusting that it will come around and make sense. Still one of my very favorite authors and no one is a better writer or story teller at the site.
Powerful writing
I thought that story ended in the last chapter which was painful enough. This one was even more painful..... The sense of being unable to take command of your life and your world is overpowering. I applaud the author's writing skills and am beginning to reach the conclusion that his vision is too dark for me. Perhaps I should follow Jim's example...
another good chapter
Truly, I like this work. I have no idea where you're planning to take all this drama. (And, for the record, I am still wondering why you chose to have two characters with the same name.) In any event, I'm looking forward to #7.
-- KK in Texas
Slowing down
Will there be a chapter 7?
There are unanswered questions even though the conclusion seems obvious, but I would like to see it played through.
A bit confused, I am.
While I enjoyed the story, I am somewhat confused about Jen's attitudes, how they developed, and what she really expected from the main character. I hope there is another chapter or two that will bring some closure to this story. You continue to be one of my feavorite authors on this site. Keep up the good work.
Backroads
TOO,TOO REAL. BROUGHT BACK SOME HURT FROM THE PAST.
VERY WELL WRITTEN. PLEASE KEEP IT UP.
A FAN.
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