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I Need More!
Poor Rillan, he's so alone and so in love with Mira. Nasty government goings on...and they expect him to do what? On his own? He probably could do it but it's not what he is there to do. And poor Mira, she loves him till her heart aches. Please don't let her marry anyone but Rillan. The next chapter should prove more informative..and I can't wait.
Good twist
As I have come to expect, a well crafted tale with nice twists and turns.
:(
Rillen isn't doing so well without Mira & she is adrift without him :( PJ xx
But...
Poor Rillan...He shouldn't have pushed Mira outa there like that...It could have done way more damage than good...So, why would Mira think that she should marry that Liam prick? I feel like I might just throw a fit if he goes anywhere near her...it just ain't right! I wouldn't hold anything against Rillan if he did end up tearing him to shreds...Mira just CAN'T marry Liam! Dunno what I think's up with the pearl thing Rillan's doing, I just know it's cute...Love your stories! Keep 'em up! XD
I feel like I just got a nibble
from the most savory morsel and now I want more! A nibble just wont do. please give me more!
Leader of the Pack
While Mira is excellent, "Leader" seems to hold more promise. Action and adventure for the guys and romance for the gals. To expand and expound on Leader provides more for the discriminating editor to create a work of art. The more you write, the more your employee has to work with. Posting here on Literotica gives you exposure that hopefully, will lead you to fame and fortune. Regardless, you are truly gifted. I can't wait to see a series of Leader novels in the store.
Can't wait
for the next installments!
More action and exitement is next!
Nobody does it better than my favorite Secretme! I can't wait!
Eee!
I've been tearing through your stuff since I discovered you. I hope you have time to finish this one soon! Let us know if you're publishing it, too.
Can't wait for More
I can't wait to see what happens next. I love this story.
Thank-You.
Awesome!
I love it, keep it up. I haven't stopped following your stuff since I read Leader, amazing. You're actually the one that inspired me to get off my lazy butt and write my own stuff. So there you go, your an inspiration. LOL. Thanks.
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