All Comments on 'With a Working Man'

Judging from the polished style of what apparently is your first erotic story, I gotta believe that you have a writing background of some sort. In your bio, you describe yourself as "heavy." If that's true, use it. BBW stories are some of the hottest, y'know. Anyhow, in case you're wondering, this story made me nice and hard and left me wishing for more from you. Nice work, babe.

If only the author realized that by including anal sex he had hopelessly ruined the stories' believability. No virgin would ever turn horny enough to allow that.

Nothing new about the plot, but the pacing and use of language was very good. Unfortunately, the author had to try to gild the lily - anal intercourse a minute or two after experience vaginal intercourse for the first time - suspension of disbelief stretched beyond the breaking point. Quit while you're ahead

I enjoyed reading your story of the young girl and the worker. I must confess I missed the part where she was supposed to be a virgin. I will say that I've had the pleasure of being with three girls who were virgins, and didn't want to give up their hymen, but allowed me to have them anally. They would take it up the butt but not in the vagina.This statement is just to give credibility the author writing about the anal sex that was mentioned. Thanks for the well written story....Rich

I loved the buildup and the way you had both of them go off the top it was sexy and sensual, you got me dripping !!!!

KATIE in NEW JERSEY

In response to previous comments - my impression was that she was not a virgin... "It had been a while, but her body hadn't forgotten the feeling"... Perhaps the placement in the 'First Time' category was an error? Perhaps it was a reference to it being her first time for anal play? Perhaps it was simply her first time "with a working man"? Perhaps it was because it was the author's 'first time'? Regardless - it was a great story - good flow, good imagery, good grammar/spelling. Please keep writing nytewulf...

holy crap best story ever in the world!!!!!!!!!11

she wasn't a virgin . . . "first time" referred to the first time she came with this particular dude. read it. love it. hottest fucking story ever.

love librarian stories , please write more. if this is your first effort then really great job.

I have a THING for carpenters so I read your story twice.

It was great. I wish I could find a carpenter at the library that was that sexy. My favorite one is on TV. Keep writing.

ravenswood

... I couldn't believe that she would have responded like that. Surely a woman like that would need much more of a seduction to behave in that way? I left half way though and told the head librarian where she was.

I have to disagree, with her having to need more seduction. I have been in a situation where a guy and I were talking and he made a move and that was all i cared about. Touching his amazing body.

Terrific reading and a delight way of building the story from low to high contents. Totally one of this sites best and I gave you a five. Continue with your writings. Oh yes, perhaps you should have him nail the head librarian.