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Dirty Little Kitten

byUconnHusky©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/29/08

spell check

angel not angle.
spell check my friend.
ok. read

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by Anonymous11/14/10

master?

where do you reside? is it me, violet?

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by ellykitty12/08/10

Your story jumps from points of view too much. Either you are telling the story from your point of view, so use I, me, mine or your telling it from a third person so use he, his. I know you can't be a huge grammar Nazi on this site, but you asked for feed back and that was a glaring issue with this story.

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by Anonymous12/10/10

Powerful....

I thought this was brilliant. I was desperate to read more! Wow. I was hoping that briefcase would be full of sex toys!

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