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Une Nuit Noire

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by Anonymous

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by WickedEve08/28/08

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Very nice. :) Mentioned on the new poems review thread.

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by Anonymous08/29/08

enjoyed

the play with the spoon idea... blue

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by unpredictablebijou09/08/08

Eve's right

You're getting more and more graceful with form and rhyme; it's always a good thing when one notices the words first and the form later, if at all. These are nice tight lines and very pretty phrases.

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by Anonymous05/26/14

slow day for poetry

and I use the term loosely. you were a poor-baby, pity seeking bitch while you were alive and it is a shame your sorry attempts at poetry survive you. No one believed me when I told them how you treated me in private messages, well, I guess I get the last laugh, you can't treat me like crap from the grave. good riddance you hateful lying byatch

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