All Comments on 'They Didn't See it Coming'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Erotic?

Great but not very erotic! Pillar to post! Keep writing it was good.

DragonDreamerDragonDreamerover 15 years ago
Terrific Story!

One might only wish it were true!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
That

is one of the best last lines ever.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good Read

Enjoyed it, now just make it happen, thanks.

incubus666incubus666over 15 years ago
Pillar to Post LMAO

Interesting concept. I was wondering about sharp pointy things until the posts appeared. Good story keep writing and entertaining us.

Thanks Mike S.

gatorhermitgatorhermitover 15 years ago
Wow! Very Interesting Story

Very clever and imaginative. Well done!

srgeeksrgeekover 15 years ago
Be careful what you wish for, you may get it.

Remember that any entity that can make you safe from yourself can take everything you have, including your life and you will have no recourse. There are those who would say that only God has that power but they are short sighted.

srgeek

srgeeksrgeekover 15 years ago
H'mmmn, Acts of violence..Mabe thoughts too

Most Doms and Sadists would quickly disappear. How about males when their females say do me hard? How many of them would disappear? How many of you want your mate to disappear when s/he slaps you when you've done something unbelievably stupid or offensive?

How many of you want to disappear because you had violent thoughts about the driver of the car that cut you off in traffic or when your mate when s/he cuts off your access to sex?

srgeek

OleTroubadorOleTroubadorover 15 years ago
Laugh!

Quite a chuckle.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Can one size fit all? Maybe in pantyhose.

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The story seems to or does say that acts of human violence are interrupted/intercepted

and the perpetrator disappeared no matter what the reason. Here are some possibilities/probabilities not mentioned in the story...</font><P>

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Within a few days most if not all of the people listed below would disappear <BR>

<B>**)</B> nearly all nurses and surgeons<BR>

<B>**)</B> slaughter house employees<BR>

<B>**)</B> drivers of vehicles as they are involved in collisions with other vehicles and/or people and/or objects likely to cause injury<BR>

<B>**)</B> engineers doing vehicle crash testing<BR>

<B>**)</B> sport and subsistence hunting<BR>

<B>**)</B> in addition to football nearly all other spectator sports<BR>

<B>**)</B> commercial and sport fishing<BR>

<B>**)</B> anyone piloting a water or aircraft that strikes a living creature (read manatees and geese for examples)<BR>

<B>**)</B> construction crews using explosives<BR>

<B>**)</B> people killing insects<BR>

<B>**)</B> people involved in dog fighting or bear baiting or other similar things<BR>

</font><P><font color="#800000">The loss of all those people would wreak havoc

on the planet.  The resulting loss of life would little different

from "loosing the dogs of war".  To me automated

intervention is just as scary as automated weapons.</font>

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Every time I read this story a few other things come to mind.</font>

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<I><font color="#800000">-- srgeek --</font></I>

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fanfarefanfareabout 9 years ago
Punitively Punny Paronomasia!

A brilliant abuse of the english language to deftly skewer modern idolatry of penis substitutes..

As usual, the proceeding analmousie did not understand either the author's wit or his writing.

The pillars disappeared chemical based explosive weaponry. The author was pretty specific about that.

Most nuclear weapons are attached to chemical fueled artillery shells, rockets, ships and aircraft.

Did the separated and stored nuclear weapons also disappear? Could those be set off without chemical explosives?

The posts disappeared individual persons who attempted to commit violence against other persons. The author made no other observations.

GymShortsGymShortsalmost 5 years ago
And now..The Rest of The Story.

So with Earth now defenseless, the aliens felt free to move in and start harvesting their human prey for food. This would ensure they lived on while the human race was exterminated. The end

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