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by illusory_transitory

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WickedEveWickedEveover 15 years ago
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Mentioned on literotica's new poems review thread, on the poetry forum.

unpredictablebijouunpredictablebijouover 15 years ago
some solid lines

and a solid idea are both present here. I felt like this was really from the heart, and yet it wasn't overdramatic. Nice work.

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