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by Anonymous04/04/11

Get an editor

If you don't know the difference between waste and waist quit writing! or find an editor who does!
Is a guarder belt some sort of chastity belt, or did you mean garter belt?
I think you meant you began to "sweat" while she began to pant - etc.

Please spare us your abuse of the language.

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