All Comments on 'Pleasure Island'

i always liked that song and you used it well in the story

Consider yourself duly killed, albeit by the limitation of a mere 5-star system. I trust you won the challenge; this was a delightful little tale.

-- KK in Texas

Your tale left no doubt of your enthusiasm. Loved it.

fucking hilarious marsh. it was all serious and then BAM beach boys!!! you are so the man.

Goober. :*

A very interesting tale, In a writing style that just begs to be used to bad ends. The only thing that pulled me out of the story was when I realized the 'poetry' was lyrics, from a time period far in advance of the apparent setting of the tale. Come to think about it, that is probably the one fault with the whole story - at first it's unclear the time frame of the story, and throughout it, your hints as to period seem slightly conflicting. Overall, I enjoyed this story.<p>

Thanks for sharing it with us!

Priceless. And I hate the Beach Boys as much as I adore RLS. :)

While catching up on stories from before I joined Literotica, I ran across this titbit of smuggery. Very clever wordplay and a kaleidoscopery of anachronisms.

a Caribbean bum (sort of) for two glorious years.

loved it!!!

'Tis a bottle o' me best rum ye be deservin' fer that wee tale. Aye, that an a full tankard t' slake yet thirst whilst I fetch the bottle.

The fact that I read the pirate in the voice of Geoffrey Rush, with herself being no less than Maureen O'Hara, made this even more fun. Thanks!!

Having sailed the caribbean and once on a three masted square rigger this is a great tale definitely captured the grizzled old man and how to tell a story

I loved it. great rest of working in the song. you could always include time travel to explain the anachronisms, after all it's not your first rodeo - stitch in time anyone?

Hahaha absolutely hilarious and clever writing too. Could have been set on a Beach the Boys all relaxing telling interesting tales. By the way when he got into the proper rhythm was it 45rpm ( Rogering per minute) 🤣🤣

Hilarious... Loved it. Started laughing when you started the lyrics...