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Please wear that dress

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by champagne198208/29/08

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I like the rhythm here and the begging quality of the repetition. You've made the rhyme unobtrusive even though it's there as an integral part of the poem, almost like a nursery rhyme for grown-ups.

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by WickedEve08/29/08

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Good poem. Really like the repeated phrase.

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