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by Safe_Bet08/29/08

Could be great.

I want to like this poem a LOT. Correcting the spelling error (your should be you're) and the unnecessary words would make me love this piece (God, can't believe I'm say too wordy.) I'd REALLY like you to bring this poem to the Poetry Feedback & Discussion Forum (http://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=25) so that some of the really excellent poets there could share their opinions. Thanks.

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