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by champagne198208/29/08

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Companionship needs to be enough, for its own sake, not a constant party. I love how you describe the atmosphere and draw parallels to living inside a short vignette. This poem mentioned on the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum.

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by Safe_Bet08/29/08

You got me!

I was so grooving on the first stanza - then I read "Me either." and almost fell from my chair! Love this piece!

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by WickedEve08/29/08

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Love the "me either" line and "trying to recapture those summer nights. And the mornings after." Good poem!

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by unpredictablebijou09/08/08

ouch

oh man is that an accurate piece. Immensely well done, even if it did mess with my head. Anyone in a long term relationship knows this sensation.

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