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by LeBroz09/03/08

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This poem has been selected for listing in Wednesday's New Poems Review.



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by WickedEve09/04/08

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I read your comment and Lebroz's on the forum. Now, I know this is about pregnancy. Before I found out, I was really taken by surprise when I read the last stanza. I think it could possibly help to make some mention, give a hint, something, so the reader isn't left totally in the dark when they get to those last few lines. :)

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