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How.
Does a idiot be allowed to keep posting this stupid crap he laughingly calls a story, its nonsense!
Because he enjoys writing?
The setup's nice, but it blows out before the story really gets going. The hound is an interesting character with a nice back story. Really set him loose on the renegers and make that the story rather than rushing through the final paragraph. Wouldn't have commented normally but I hate to see random anonymous bashing.
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