by Lez_writer
This better have a second part hiding somewhere! Loved your lead in, not to rushed. Perfect char. development. Please post a second part if you haven't allready done so.
Part two please. You developed the characters and the story line with precision and a deft touch. This story cries out for a sequel.
I loved the story, but you penalized yourself by putting it in the Lesbian category. This is a romance and a well written one, too.
Excellent story. I viewed it through the eyes of Sara and you made it so interesting for her and treated her well. I read all 5 chapters and the progression of this story was superb.
This story made me feel good (not just in an erotic way, although it did that also). So I'm putting it in the "Feel Good" category (my favorite). Also, I think it was placed just where it should be.
Thank you for this story and please continue to write.