All Comments on 'The Therapist'

I like. Nice start. They are both really sexy characters. I cant wait to see where you take them.

Like the Fantasies of the two it will be interesting to see where they take it from here.

Continue writing. I like this story.

Needs better editing, but nice start.

Awesome!

Love Jake and cory already, it was a great start!

Intro-->...describe them individually, guys are usually unlikely to identify specific pieces of clothing that girls wear.

Little Punctuation and spelling issues, nothing big. Could have benefited from a proof read though.

But then again, it's only Literotica.

I liked the story but some things did not make sense like:

1) Her height Going from 5'8 to 6'2 in heels is really out there.

2) If she was 6'2 Why Couldn't she reach the to shelf !?! I'm 5'3 and at almost any store I can reach the top shelf (unless it's a warehouse like Costco.)

3) This sentence:"I'm Cory Roberts, its pleasure as well." She said shaking his hand and loving the filling of him enveloping him with her touch, even if it was just his hand." did not make sense. Maybe it's just me though.

This is actually my second time reading it (the first time being when it was just posted) and the first time around I didn't actually notice those things except #3.

I did rate the story a 5 though because I love the storyline and your writing is better than most people on this site:))

I thought the chocolate scene was adorable.

have someone to edit your series and the flow will keep going instead of having to stop and correct the wording, other than that it is good.

Busy hands