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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/28/08

Wishful Thinking

Nice story. Short, hot and sweet. Would appreciate more from this author.

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by nightwatcherine03/31/10

Why did you not explain how he's got control over women's minds? Why do they do everything for him? For someone who just wants to get off, the sex part might be enough, but for the story to be a good one, you actually need a plot. That won't do!

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by Anonymous07/30/12

no go

Unrealistically abrupt. Suggest you read more and write less.

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