Writer has gotten a rep as a great starter -with good plots -but all of his work lets the reader down in the end --Waits way to long between chapters and loses interest and escapes with hastily written ending--Check out his work - I know you'll agree!--what a waste of talent!!!
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Anonymous09/10/08
so far so good
can't wait for the next installment - luv'd the Second Thoughts series; this one looks like it's gonna be just as HOT!
Why do writers of exhibitionism and voyeurism so often want to post under Loving Wives? In any event, it is soooo
sophomoric.
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Anonymous09/26/08
What a putz
now that he has shown that he is willing and eager to sell access to his wife, he has become a pimp. They both deserve each other I just hope there are not kids, and he has a good health insurance policy for her having sex with other men and bring him home a disease. Perhaps he won't get a disease, being too mucuh of a wimp to have sex with his wife after she has had sex with others.
As opposed to many comments here, there is no pimping involved here. It is just open-mindedness that is occurring which is just a natural animalistic urge between two people. She should be encouraged to do more of this by her husband next time without panties.
You quickly introduce two likable characters innocently flirting with danger- A great way to start a story. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Oh, I don't have to!
English
As Bad as the Ending of "Second Thoughts"
Writer has gotten a rep as a great starter -with good plots -but all of his work lets the reader down in the end --Waits way to long between chapters and loses interest and escapes with hastily written ending--Check out his work - I know you'll agree!--what a waste of talent!!!
so far so good
can't wait for the next installment - luv'd the Second Thoughts series; this one looks like it's gonna be just as HOT!
Not again.
.
Jeeze!!!
Why do writers of exhibitionism and voyeurism so often want to post under Loving Wives? In any event, it is soooo
sophomoric.
What a putz
now that he has shown that he is willing and eager to sell access to his wife, he has become a pimp. They both deserve each other I just hope there are not kids, and he has a good health insurance policy for her having sex with other men and bring him home a disease. Perhaps he won't get a disease, being too mucuh of a wimp to have sex with his wife after she has had sex with others.
No Pimping Here....
As opposed to many comments here, there is no pimping involved here. It is just open-mindedness that is occurring which is just a natural animalistic urge between two people. She should be encouraged to do more of this by her husband next time without panties.
Very nice start....
You quickly introduce two likable characters innocently flirting with danger- A great way to start a story. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Oh, I don't have to!
Legal Mate Sex
Anyone can fuck their wife or husband. Nothing very erotic here.
Excellent story!
I can read it over and over again...
Intriguing
Great start
Great Start
You really know how to describe the playful event and the excitement of a cuckold wannabe. I love it.
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