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An Ode to Oregon

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by Anonymous

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by 09/08/08

Nice Images!

This poem is mentioned in today's New Poem Review in the Poetry Feedback & Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!

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by unpredictablebijou09/08/08

man, I really liked this

just a lot, right up till the last line, which bugged the hell out of me. It's not just the exclamation points, it's more that it really didn't need to be said; you've made the point that this is your home and you love it, in far more sophisticated ways earlier in the piece. You've got a piece here that's pretty close to perfect, though. Very well done.

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by sassynyc09/09/08

lovely lament

this reads like a letter to your first love. you're clearly smitten. :) thank you for letting us in to share such intimacy.

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