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Nothing But a Toy

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by Anonymous09/11/08

please write more!

I loved it...the weaving back and forth between 'too much' and 'not enough,' the conflict, the ache, the need, the completion.

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by Anonymous12/18/08

once again, wow!

i so enjoy the way you write,what a gift girl. the wonderful details,paint a vivid picture in my mind.the rhythm of this story just builds up,until the explosive climax.good work siren. please write more.

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