All Comments on 'A Crash Course In Losing Virginity Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
You are great

I wish to have a lover like you :) With your passion, ideas and dedication :)

Keep your spirit up, study and write some more in your free time. I would love to learn more about your and your life

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Nice stuff, keep writing

I really like your writing. I hope you find the time to write more both about your life and more of your fictional, fantasy stories. Relationships come and go. You'll find someone else who you can have lots of fun with.

LairdmckimLairdmckimover 14 years ago
Once again very well done.

As all of your stories, this was very well done. It really puts your reader in your skin seeing the story from your own eyes. Keep writing, adult or otherwise you have some gift for it.

Good luck and best wishes.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Error: check where you went, and left, but then left from same place again

Matt didn't arrive at my apartment until about midnight. He pretty much looked like I remembered him -- tall, kind of skinny, dark brown hair, teasing eyes. Since he got in so late, we went to a local sports bar downtown, Jillian's, where we had dinner. While Matt had a beer, I just had a diet coke. I had no intention of getting drunk and accidentally sleeping with Matt. Ya, wait till you hear how that worked out. While we were at Jillian's, Matt noticed crowds of people all walking in one direction, and went outside to ask them where they were going. Turned out, there was another bar, Howl at the Moon, just a little ways down the street. Once we finished eating, we headed to Howl, where Matt convinced me that I should have a few drinks and loosen up. We both had a few beers, and I don't know if it was the beer or what, but a little while into the night, I definitely wanted to kiss Matt (well, I'd probably do more, but I'd start with a kiss). I didn't do anything though, because I was still trying to keep myself from doing anything that would end me up in bed with Matt. We stayed at Jillian's until about 2 a.m., when Matt

gracesnowpawgracesnowpawabout 9 years ago
I enjoyed it.

I think your story was very sincere and appreciated it. As a writer myself, I know the the commitment it requires to put yourself down on paper like that.

As for the Anon that left "error check", ignore that fool. Firstly if you are going to leave constructive feedback, maybe he should have left something useful. I find Anon to be a terrible option on here because it empowers people with silly opinions to voice them without being called on it.

Keep writing. I wish you the best in love and your future.

Grace

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